Koshka

@ellette-giselle

Another thing:

Why is it that bad guys always seem to ride black horses?

“Because, God has called me to bring the message of salvation to my people,” Rolf replied.

Hmmm…I thought you were going to take the story to where God had called those two to stay there and evangelize that area…but I guess not.

Leon smirked, havi…

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I just sent another message through the Contact Us page. I checked around for an email and found ‘kingdompenmag@gmail.com.’ I’m not sure if this is the only inbox KP uses, so I’m going to wait for a while before directly using this email instead of Contact Us.

I think the best thing to do right now is to have a backup plan, and try to get…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Neat! I loved the part of when the lion came to rescue them. As soon as I read about that lion I knew it was there to protect them!!!! That happened to a character of mine as well.

Hmm…the part when they got tied in the dessert gave me flashbacks of Leiand.

And…*crying* You killed another one of my favorite characters! Why…[Read more]

@keilah-h

What exactly does that entail?

Snipercore, reptiles, sci-fi, things like that. Also, I’ve never tried to use a 3D animation engine, but now that you’ve started playing with that, I associate you with the vibe of minimal-effect 3D models. I know that’s very specific and doesn’t make a lot of sense, but it’s in my brain now. Lol.

There’s n…

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I want somebody to digitally smack/spam me if I haven’t updated Marcel or Barnes within 24 hours.

*Extremely embarrassed at the length of the post* Also Sara, just because I yapped a lot does not mean you have to ‘fix’ anything. I’ve explained how I would edit, but those are my opinions and this is your project. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

no I haven’t!!!

Oki, I’m going to explain this structure because it seems to work for a looot of stories! 🙃 It’s very broad/all-encompassing, except for some Eastern cultures and the like.

I did not invent all of this. I listened to Brandon Sanderson’s writing lectures and explained them in my own words. So just to clarify, I…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I don’t like being super graphic/body horror about it, I just make sure my favorite characters come out of it with a tangible reminder of the incident.

Tangible reminder is a fun trope. I haven’t used it too often. I can’t remember the last time I gave a character a dramatic scar. It feels like something that belongs in the Keilah genre. :p

To be faaiir I do not even know who Alec and Everette are. Yet. I’m getting there. 🤣

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

But it’s so sad when the favorite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!

If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters.

But trauma doesn’t automatically make characters deeeeep… 😫 Actually side note, I’ve been thinking about this topic and we should make a thread for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

But it’s so sad when the favotite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!

If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters. You never know if you’re hero has what it takes until you throw him in the thick of it. I have high hopes for both, and I want to see them live up to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

He and Alec are my favorite.

I hope one of them dies in the end.

Why am I not surprised loll

@esther-c

*Slips in* I’ve also met somebody who looks like one of your Hallie faceclaims. 😅 First moodboard, left, with the long red hair. It’s crazy how similar they look. I’ve had this thought since you started using the photo, but never thought to tell you for some reason.

@hybridlore

Does Everette have a board??? I want an Everette board!!!

He and Alec are my favorite.

I hope one of them dies in the end.

@esther-c

I TOLD YOU I MET HER IN REAL LIFE!!!!!

Maybe all our writing has come to life and our characters are walking around in different places!! (sounds like a movie or something)

It could be kinda scary if some of my villains got loose. 😂

@esther-c

Lolollol.

Ready??!……. You’re not gonna believe it……….

Mexican.

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NEXT SECTION!!!

Days passed, and slowly, Leon regained some of the strength he had lost. On the second week, he was told he could work if he wanted to, and he did so with a will. It was wonderful to be with Rolf again, and the work was not draining a…

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@koshka

I’m glad it worked!!

Yes, poor Conrad.

🤨 That’s odd….. I feel like I said he DIDN’T cry. I can remember several times he would have, but he couldn’t. And there was the one time at the end where he cried, but I alluded to the fact that it would have been more sound than tears.

Maybe I’m missing something………..

@esther-c

Hey guess what?!?

I just ran into your character Hallie the other day!!! NO LIE! She looked EXACTLY like the face claim, she had the same personality from what I’ve read of your book!!!!

It was driving me crazy! She and her fiance were visiting our church and I grantee you I kept sneaking glances at her. She had on a black…[Read more]