@koshka
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Okay, hang on, here we go.
Leon and Julian
Leon took a slow step back, eyes narrowed. “Be more careful when throwing blows before asking questions. Where I come from, that can get a man killed.”
Julian raised an eyebrow. “You two look like a couple cats about to get into a spat.” He turned back to the stranger. “If you’re also not from…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
The post above was a little confusing……. but from what I gather you almost knocked Julian’s lights out?
Leon and Julian
Julian jerked back as a fist nearly slammed into his face. Before he could blink, Leon was in front of him, a dagger in his hand. “I suggest you turn around and walk away,” he said the the stranger. “We only asked…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
NO QUARTER NOVEMBER IS HERE!!!!!!!!!
START A FIRE!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Leon and Julian
The two friends reached the city and paused near the gates. Everything was so dark and empty. Leon rested a hand on the hilt of his sword. “I don’t have a good feeling about this place. It seems like something’s wrong. We may be walking into a trap.”
“My thoughts exactly,” replied Julian, before slipping through the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Because it’s
HAPPY REFORMATION DAY Y’ALL!!!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Ack! NO!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Awesome!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Ooo I like it so much better! This super, super good.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
One two three…… here I go!
(I may add another character if that’s okay……… but for now I’ll stick with one.)
Nope, scrap that. Julian would never survive without Leon, and vice versa.
Can I have weapons? I’m gonna start out with my guys having weapons and if that’s not allowed then they can lose them.
Julian and Leon Are…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Yeah, it just doesn’t have any depth to it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 weeks, 3 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I would have chosen something like this instead. Now here’s a piece with heart and soul in it! You can feel the pain in this song.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I would have chosen something like this instead. Now here’s a piece with heart and soul in it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Okay, okay, I also had it on while reading, and I was…… underwhelmed…….. To put it gently.
It just feels like the difference between a wind up music box and watching the Danish National Symphony. There just wasn’t any heart and character behind it! The music didn’t feel alive to me.
Well, there’s my honest opinion.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
No comment on the soundtrack…? 😏
I couldn’t think of anything un-scathing to say.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Yes, if the others are wanting to draw something this time. You can tag them and ask.
Or I can….
@mineralizedwritings @rae @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium
Are any of y’all in interested in extending the deadline, or are you just not going to be doing this character at all?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I’m still in!
Do we have a storyline or plot that I haven’t been made aware of……….?
I feel like I might be missing something?
When should I introduce my character?
Yep, tomorrow sounds great!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
lol. Thanks. I should read the entirety of a post thread before joining in. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@whaley
This sounds fun! I’ve wanted to do a short story contest for a while.
By the by, just to clarify, is it 500 words minimum, or maximum? Also, does it need to be a new story?
@koshka But it’s my darling Language and Diction Experiment. 0.O (But great idea. I might jump off onto my other more scar-central stories though.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Finally. I’ve been really looking forward to this chapter. It was good timing too. This was the point in Alan’s life when he was ready. The line “He didn’t need to become that hero, for The Saviour had been that hero for him.” is truly quotable.
Just one small thing.
You start the sentence:
After a little more hesitation. D…
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