Koshka

@ellette-giselle

Ok. I am in the middle of section 2. I’ll go back and finish it. I’m just so… amazed.

WHY would ANYONE in his right mind Say That? XD I’m sorry, it’s just something I remember from a visiting missionary. You rarely if ever start off saying “the gods are false.” Telling people everything they believe is a lie will typically…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I like Rasins. Good for Leon and Julian not rejecting them.

why would anyone reject raisins!!??

Hmm. They’ve been away for about ten years, so things are going to feel very different to them. I can try to add a coming home feel.

Yes, they’ve had a wild day, and it’s just getting started.

Interesting. Both the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ooo, lies. XD if I remember right, they want to start with little lies (because they’re more believable) and then work toward bigger lies with more power. So here are some ideas for chains of lies.

“You should be able to be strong enough on your own” (so when you falter, “you must be a failure” can follow)

“If God loved you,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I looked it up. The wolf is adorable! But, does he have a name?

@linus-smallprint

did you see the newest sections?

@linus-smallprint

Haha, That sounds like a funny strip.

Hmm, well you would be correct. Maybe. I like some long games, like Everdale, and I love Chess, but other then that I’m not much of a board game person. I like to play them once, (maybe twice) but after that it feels repetitive. *shrug*

I like card games tho. XD

The only time a…

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@savannah_grace2009

Thank you.

It was someone I didn’t know, but there’s still a lot of craziness. We’re leaving for Idaho on Saturday, so you can guess it’s a little hectic.  😉

@savannah_grace2009

We had a death in the family and I’m super busy, but I’ll see what I can do.

@liberty

yeah. They’re tall. Just not tall as Ardentans.

@ellette-giselle

Yes! For some reason, I imagined the people of the Empire to be taller…in movies, the Romans are usually taller…

@liberty

Awesome.

Make sense about the height thing?

@hybridlore

Good, I’m glad Leon’s back story felt natural.

Yes, it is going to be a little harder. Julian may want to curb his eagerness…..

@ellette-giselle

I read the first post from today.

@liberty

So, Ardentans are very tall. (Averaging on the higher end of six feet for men, and the lower end of six feet for women)

The people of the Empire are more average, perhaps a little on the shorter side. Leon and Julian are considered tall in their country, but they are only about the height of average Ardentan women.

Lol. I just always…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

By the way, I still don’t know what to call the people of the Empire! Are they actually called Empirians?

@ellette-giselle

“It will be so strange to be tall again,” Julian grinned.

What does that mean? I’m sure the past two books talk about it…but I didn’t read them as you know.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION! 2

It was after sunset, and Julian and Leon were walking alone in the dim light. “So, how should we go about this?” Julian asked.

“I say the same as we did when on the run in Ardenta. We’ll try to get a place to sleep with a family, shar…

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@hybridlore

So, what do you think of them? You like their characters?

@anyone

Trees by Twenty One Pilots

Great song in my opinion

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NEXT SECTION!

(In case anyone hasn’t noticed, I’m starting out small because this is the beginning after all. I think the sections will get bigger soon, and I’ll also maybe post some more today.)

Julian sat down on a rock by the path and drew in several dee…

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