Koshka

@keilah-h

I love the word cricky, and it was the first thing that came to mind. I was going to substitute it with a more American option, but then realized you would be someone who could appreciate a good British/Australian exclamation, so I left it.

A little if both I would say.

@liberty

Ah, so it is.

I forgot they had the same name! lol.

@ellette-giselle

Great! That’s a great trope to break.

Ernst is the name of Josef’s son in CR, right?

@liberty

Yeah, it must be the fact that I’m breaking a story trope where the wild animals always attack.

Yep! This is a German/Roman hybrid. The German just hasn’t come out much until now.

And…you created another Ernst?

Sorry?

@ellette-giselle

I just read your latest section. I was struck by how German their names are!😂 And…you created another Ernst?

Haha! I’ve had others complain that the wolves DIDN’T attack! XD.

Then, I’m extremely glad I told you my input. The animals do not have to attack every single time! *shaking head* So unrealistic.

@liberty

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Julian, run!”

Leon is still trying to gather his thoughts and figure out what Julian just jumped into…. lol.

Got that about the river.

Haha! I’ve had others complai…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

My thoughts on Section 2:

“We don’t believe in the gods of the Empire,” Julian cut in.

There was a stunned silence.

“We worship the One true God,” Julian explained.

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Ju…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh I thought it was funny. No worries!

@whalekeeper   @loopylin

wHaT!??

Loopy never seemed weird to me.

Funny thing, Whaley, I couldn’t make head or tale of YOU for forever!! Still not sure if i have.  XD

@keilah-h

Oh Cricky!

I never knew you wanted to whack me!

lolololol

@koshka

Exactly.

Y’all on here are the only friends I’ve got who don’t think I’m weird or crazy.

@keilah-h

Yup! You are spot on!

@linus-smallprint

I just got way too much satisfaction out of that response.

@loopylin

Haha! SAME!!! I listened to the first two and read the rest!

Did you get the multi voice reading?

@keilah-h

Because the government outlawed marriage and she was married……………

@linus-smallprint

just joking. I just couldn’t resist.

It’s me. It’s the Elvish translation of my name.

@linus-smallprint

No!

I have no idea who that is!

@linus-smallprint

I just requested access. I’m using an alias but it’s me.

@koshka

aw, thank you!!!

@hybridlore

Well…. I was working on a project I need to get done….. but I’ve never been one to resist puppydog eyes.

@koshka

Okay, that makes sense.

@linus-smallprint

I almost said Eustace but I LOVE him in The Last Battle and I don’t love Eric at the moment……