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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Have you ever given a charrie of yours a weird mannerism that you have yourself?
A few of my charries like to sleep in a fetal position, or curled up around a pushie or blanket. And Gabriel stretches similar to a cat. Mannerisms I sometimes have.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper
The Protector—Gabriel
The scent of the smoke invaded Gabriel’s nostrils. It sickened him, but he remained silent, listening to Cassius’s talk about pleasure. Internally, he wondered if happiness and pleasure were different, and if they were, how were they different. A small plop sound woke him from his thoughts. H…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
How did the doctor visit go?
The Protector—Gabriel
Gabriel hesitated, before sitting on the stone, bringing his knees up to his chest. He tensed at the slightest noises, eyes darting to where Cassius and Leander slept. “Uh… so do you want me talk like the Protector, or like…my other persona? Or just not talk at all.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
ah, that makes a little more sense.
okay then. Looks like we both win. I forgot their Babylonian names were used when they were set over provinces.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
still very confused…. Washing soap?
Really? It seemed Daniel’s friends are referred to by their Babylonian names, but maybe that is just in the book of Daniel. Huh. I guess the most famous stuff is what ends up sticking around more.
I can check my notes again, but when I did an indeph study into Daniel I’m almost positive the o…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you!
I spent at least an hour cleaning soap
what?!
Okay. Where are all those ladies and older people hiding?
In the olden days girls didn’t really do things on their own. In Roman culture it was actually inappropriate for a young woman to be on the streets alone. Plus, they were considered as property of their father…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Absolutely.
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Ruth replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
I’ll see if I have time. I have rowing to do, plus I’m looking into getting a job this summer as well as taking the first steps to getting my driver’s permit since I’m turning 16 end of July and would like to get my permit as soon as possible. If I have time, I’d be interested!
Not sure what I’d write yet though…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
This sounds like a cool idea. I don’t write very orthodox, so I won’t have an outline. (just character outlines). I’m also not sure if I’m sharing my current novels on line for marketing purposes. (They’ll be releasing this summer, starting with the first one later this month)
But I’d sure be willing to breathe down anyone’s neck who…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
Two days later, Leon was walking home from visiting the Krügers in the late evening. He was nearly home when someone called out, “You there, what’s your business?”
Leon turned around and saw a young soldier lean…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
I was gonna give people a chance to catch up while I busy myself shooting and poor characters and dumping them out of airplanes……. but I think I’ll post the next section now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 4 weeks ago
You should make a photo copy of the sketch and try out the colors you have in your mind on that, and if you like it, then go for it, but if not, you have the backup. That’s what I always do. I never color the original, I like to keep a backup. Plus, colored pencils tend to smear when mixed with graphite.
YES!!! DO!!!
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper
The Protector—Gabriel
“Yes, my birthmarks aren’t a mental illness, but that doesn’t mean that people don’t hate me, or judge me. If I was not the Protector, if I didn’t wear the mask, if I didn’t hide the birthmarks, I would have been killed by the people I protect everyday.” Gabriel clears his throat again, v…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Is Marcel here? Because if he is, he might get pelted with apologies from Chase
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper
Well, I guess it’s a go for finalizing the sketch and then coloring it. I have a few coloring choices I’m deciding on. I might add a starry backdrop, and make his hair silver, or just do like it’s daytime. That’s why the top part of the page is devoid of anything at the moment.
Tbh, after an experience…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @the_lost-journal
The Protector—Gabriel
“So it wasn’t a flippant reason after all. That’s surprising.” Gabriel’s voice sounds young again. His hand moves towards his own mask, hesitates, then slightly dislodges it. A small sliver of skin showing a small cluster of strange birthmarks on his jaw, could be seen. He shows them to C…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 4 weeks ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 4 weeks ago

Really sorry for the bad quality. The splotch by his mouth is not supposed to be there btw. This is my sketch so far for Baron. I’ve gone through many different poses, and was wondering for feedback, how good is this?
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper
The Protector—Gabriel
Gabriel leaned close to Leander, whispering, “He doesn’t know what ‘flippancy’ means, does he?”
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