Koshka

@raxforge @loopylin

Syph

This hall was getting rather full of too tall people, but this place was probably full of such halls. He sighed. Best to find his way while there was someone of the Big hight on hand to see where they were going.

“Nay, my friend. I must decline your kind offer, although I certainly do appreciate your generosity. There…[Read more]

@liberty

That gives me time. =) I sort of forgot too, but the story is nearly finished anyway.

@loopylin @raxforge

Sypher

He followed the two girls, happy to have found someone that didn’t tower over him. Not that he was short. Some of these students were simply far overgrown.

Which made walking in their midst highly uncomfortable. Syph sidestepped a blundering youth, sending him a scalding glare as he slipped away.

The hallway was…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ah, that would explain it a bit.

@loopylin

Okay, the Starlight song, what is the story behind those lyrics? Because those last few lines seemed to get really specific…

@grcr

If you did a comic, I’d pay to read it.

*snort*

@whalekeeper

XD

All people are weird in their own way, some more dramatically than others. It’s the “normal” ones that usually scare me.

@ellette-giselle

Because we’re right there with you. XD

But aren’t we all a little crazy? I mean, that’s at least what writers joke about…

@whalekeeper

*realizes this is several pages back*

*shrugs*

Yes, I think it had to do with the helmet and nearly indestructible armor thing? Along with the galactic justice finder (although Leo is kinda on the other side of things if I’m not mistaken, but I haven’t actually seen The Mandalorian).

@ellette-giselle

Why thank you. I do try to…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*GASPETH*

YES I want to see aesthetics!? I would totally read this book, or books, or whatever. It sounds absolutely lovely.

*deep breath*

*marginally calms down*

How long have you been working on it/has it been a thing? Even a vague figment of a dream?

@ellette-giselle

I am really enjoying the world building. Keep it up!

@ellette-giselle

Oops, sorry. I was waiting for class to start and in a hurry, so I wasn’t thinking through my writing.

What I meant was, do your characters need to make the right choice? Or should they mess up a couple times, possibly showing that God can work through even our mistakes, and working on character flaws. Although, you did already…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hmm.

Could you use this to portray a character flaw? Idk exactly what you have in mine for flaws though.

Hmmmmm…

Okay, here’s a few. I was also told that Zlatin Vratisin is a lot like somebody named Balian…except that I was also told not to watch that movie… *is concerned for my character*

@ellette-giselle

XD

Leo

He bit back a grin. “Like they always say, it’s not save to jump out of a moving vehicle.”

The lorry door whooshed open. Silvia led the group aboard, waving their bus card under a the scanner. Leo helped Rory up the steps as inconspicuously as possible. The lorry was mostly empty this early in the morning. Their few…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Silvia

Spangled darkness in a thousand colors. Gleaming nebula. White dwarfs.

Silvia blinked away the swirling images. Another time maybe. She’d fly again. She shrugged.

“Just wondering. Not many people around here have.”

She turned her head, catching the distant rattling of the bus coming up the street. A sigh brushed past…[Read more]

@grcr

Wow. I love the personality of each character (especially the girl hanging off the banister). And the texture on the leaves is gorgeous.

*continues to stare at picture wondering what the characters are like*

@ellette-giselle

Leo

Listening to Rory’s pain filled breathing made Leo’s own throat ache. He shifted to take more of the kid’s weight.

Then they were on the pavement outside the apartment complex. Another five halting steps deposited them on the bench at the bus stop. Leo let out a gust of air.

“Sorry kid. You probably shouldn’t be out of bed…[Read more]