Koshka

@whalekeeper

*realizes this is several pages back*

*shrugs*

Yes, I think it had to do with the helmet and nearly indestructible armor thing? Along with the galactic justice finder (although Leo is kinda on the other side of things if I’m not mistaken, but I haven’t actually seen The Mandalorian).

@ellette-giselle

Why thank you. I do try to…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*GASPETH*

YES I want to see aesthetics!? I would totally read this book, or books, or whatever. It sounds absolutely lovely.

*deep breath*

*marginally calms down*

How long have you been working on it/has it been a thing? Even a vague figment of a dream?

@ellette-giselle

I am really enjoying the world building. Keep it up!

@ellette-giselle

Oops, sorry. I was waiting for class to start and in a hurry, so I wasn’t thinking through my writing.

What I meant was, do your characters need to make the right choice? Or should they mess up a couple times, possibly showing that God can work through even our mistakes, and working on character flaws. Although, you did already…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hmm.

Could you use this to portray a character flaw? Idk exactly what you have in mine for flaws though.

Hmmmmm…

Okay, here’s a few. I was also told that Zlatin Vratisin is a lot like somebody named Balian…except that I was also told not to watch that movie… *is concerned for my character*

@ellette-giselle

XD

Leo

He bit back a grin. “Like they always say, it’s not save to jump out of a moving vehicle.”

The lorry door whooshed open. Silvia led the group aboard, waving their bus card under a the scanner. Leo helped Rory up the steps as inconspicuously as possible. The lorry was mostly empty this early in the morning. Their few…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Silvia

Spangled darkness in a thousand colors. Gleaming nebula. White dwarfs.

Silvia blinked away the swirling images. Another time maybe. She’d fly again. She shrugged.

“Just wondering. Not many people around here have.”

She turned her head, catching the distant rattling of the bus coming up the street. A sigh brushed past…[Read more]

@grcr

Wow. I love the personality of each character (especially the girl hanging off the banister). And the texture on the leaves is gorgeous.

*continues to stare at picture wondering what the characters are like*

@ellette-giselle

Leo

Listening to Rory’s pain filled breathing made Leo’s own throat ache. He shifted to take more of the kid’s weight.

Then they were on the pavement outside the apartment complex. Another five halting steps deposited them on the bench at the bus stop. Leo let out a gust of air.

“Sorry kid. You probably shouldn’t be out of bed…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You’re fine. You’re still in charge of your character, but I get it. =)

Leo

He stacked their empty plates and carried them to the sink. They’d do the washing up later.

“Quincy, you got your backpack?”

The boy nodded and grinned, swinging his feet under his chair. Bare feet. Silvia her out a half exasperated laugh. “Monkey,…[Read more]

@raxforge

Syph

“Head to class, head to class. Not a bad idea if zi knew where said class was.” He flipped backwards off Rax’s shoulders to land in a crouch in a cushioning puddle. He flicked the water away and dusted off the moisture. “Time of reconing I suppose. You wouldn’t happen to know where the…” He pulled a folded up bit of parchment…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

She walked out of the sound booth and into the school halls, leaving an empty path behind her with frightened students in her wake.

XD

@raxforge

Sypher

“Oh, precisely.” Syph responded to the question without hearing. Arenas. Masters. Toadstools. He blinked, refocusing on the ceiling. Then slipped up to stand on Rax’s shoulders. He reached out to touch one arch. Such a strange choice of patterns.

“You’d think a pixie’d built this place with as many leaves everywhere.” There…[Read more]

@raxforge

Sypher

“Master Rax?” Syph propped one elbow atop the youth’s head and twisted around to squint behind him. But this felt almost too secure a position. Too controlled. He hummed to himself, resting his crossed arms on his makeshift table.

Still, there were advantages to being this high. He didn’t have to crane his neck to study the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Leo

“Well…” Leo dragged out the word into a verbal smile. “First things first, you’ll need to get cleaned up for the day. I have some extra clothes you can have, and most of those bandages need changed too. Then breakfast. If you need help with anything, please let me know. I’ve been knocked about a few times before. Leaves…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Amen! God writes the best stories.

@whalekeeper

Oh my. XD Lucille Barnes…..that’s perfect and I haven’t even seen the Mandalorian.

Now I have to remember who’s been compared to whom…I haven’t seen most of them so I usually don’t remember…

@whalekeeper

Oh, that’s not good. I’ll be praying you get stuff figured out, and find a good solution.

@stephie

Yay!! God is good!