@kina-lamb
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
ah, @dragon-snapper, I just had an idea. Daeus loves to sing, he’s always singing, and he sings really well. He loves symphonies, too. Oh, he loves symphonies! (Did I mention he wants to write one of his own?) If you could capture his love of music in your story, it would be really accurate. 😀
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper I absolutely cannot believe that I didn’t see this earlier!!! Wow, this is great! Although…. I do have to say that Daeus isn’t like how you pictured him. He really is very kind and not at all controlling or desiring of power… 😀 But I do have to say, the part when “As they marched into the armory, Daeus conldn’t help but say,…[Read more]
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@daeus give credit where credit is due. 😀
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@daeus that was my idea!
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Kina Lamb posted a new activity comment 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi @emma-flournoy ! Do you have any ideas on how to describe an angry knocking on a door? I was thinking like a “Bang. Bang,” but then I thought it might be mistaken for gun shots. I thought about “Thud. Thud,” but it sounds kind of soft, do you think? It’s Turkish soldiers banging on the door of my great-grandpa’s house that I want to describe. Thanks!
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Hey Kina!
You’re right, the ‘thud’ sounds kind of soft. ‘Bang’ is a little bettter, and I don’t think it’s too similar to guns, but it is very common. So…crack…pound…hammer…? Those wouldn’t all work the way you had it—the word repeated twice slowly. I mean, it would sound a little weird. ‘Hammer. Hammer.’
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@Kina-Lamb Did you find something to work?
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@emma-flournoy oh sorry! I meant to reply to this. For now I’m just doing “Knock. Knock. Knock.” As I read over great grandpa’s story, I realized that the Turk soldiers weren’t really angry, they were just a little rough, so “Knock Knock Knock” sounds better to me now than it did before. I am going to add some background information before that. I…[Read more]
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@Kina-Lamb Great! *high-five*
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Kina Lamb and
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Kina Lamb started the topic Armenian Genocide Childrens Book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi everyone! In California I got the idea for my childrens book. 😀 My great grandpa was in the Armenian Genocide, and his story is really exciting. I’ve decided to preserve his legacy by writing a childrens story on it! I took some notes from his story while there, and I’ve got the story that my grandpa typed up, so when I have time, I’m going to…[Read more]
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Scripture Memorization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi everyone! I just got back. 😀 On the plane I memorized Luke 7:36-50. And @emma-flournoy, I remembered to salute you every time I got on the plane!
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument I’m obviously from Ohio. 😀
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Hello All! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 hi! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m pretty new myself. 😀 What are your favorite books? What do you like to write?
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Au revoir! (I looked that up. I DON’T know French. 😀 )
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@emma-flournoy that’s amazing. I’ll try to remember to salute you when I board the plane. 😀
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi guys! I’m going to be in California until Wednesday night, so if I don’t answer your posts, it’s because I can’t, not because I don’t like you anymore. 😀 My great-grandma is turning 100 so we’re attending her birthday party!
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Scripture Memorization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper *gives you a high-five.* Yay for NKJV! That’s my version, too! *Gives you another high-five.* Hey I went to the speech competition last night and won first place! I recited Psalm 40. 😀
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Scripture Memorization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Wow, a church that memorizes God’s word, that’s a treasure and practically unheard of. 😀 What church do you go to? *returns the high-five.*
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