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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
SPECIAL NEXT SECTION!!! Part 2 of today!!!
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
October 27th Â
The EmpireWe spent all day today going up and down the streets. We mostly explored our surroundings, though we did talk with a few of the peo…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Seriously?? 🤣
Look, how many people have I actual killed? Like…. five. (not counting mass casualties of unknown characters in war. But those go without saying.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Thats….. sad.🤣
No Airsoft?!? No horseback riding? No running, running, running until you go faster and farther then you ever thought before. (mostly because you and your friend are being chased by imaginary badguys, although once it was a rabid coyote.) no scaling rocks and hiking mountains? No sparing and grappling? 😂😂😂😂😂
I love…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
YESSSSSS!!!!!! Yes! Yes! Yes! *continues chanting and hopes Hybridlore can hear it*
🤨 It’s not ever ten seconds. Drama!!!!
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Besides, I said he can live. He just needs to be roughed up real bad.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
My dad takes us kids disc golfing sometimes. It’s a lot of fun. 🙂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
WHAT?!?! Noooooo!! That’s proving all the myths true! Be an author who is active in mind and body. 😊
And I love watching wheelchair basketball because my brother plays.
Cool!
wait…. is he in a wheelchair? Or does he just do it for the fun of the sport?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
It reminds me of The Horse and his Boy when Shasta is in the desert and Aslan comes to help him.
Yup, reminds me of that too. And Daniel!
lol why is this funny to me. (It probably wasn’t funny to him though.)
Lololol. It was funny to me….
Although, the whole “these people with their talk of the One True God are gonna bring a curse…
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hybridlore replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 3 months ago
Weird. I’ll have to look into it—I really don’t know if it’s a great option or not, but I remembered it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
        October 7th
        The EmpireAs you will see by yesterday’s entries, I have returned to the Empire. It took all of yesterday to chronicle everything that happened to Ro…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
You’re totally fine. Thanks! 😁
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
What exactly does that entail?
Snipercore, reptiles, sci-fi, things like that. Also, I’ve never tried to use a 3D animation engine, but now that you’ve started playing with that, I associate you with the vibe of minimal-effect 3D models. I know that’s very specific and doesn’t make a lot of sense, but it’s in my brain now. Lol.
There’s n…
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I don’t like being super graphic/body horror about it, I just make sure my favorite characters come out of it with a tangible reminder of the incident.
Tangible reminder is a fun trope. I haven’t used it too often. I can’t remember the last time I gave a character a dramatic scar. It feels like something that belongs in the Keilah genre. :p
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
But it’s so sad when the favorite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!
If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters.
But trauma doesn’t automatically make characters deeeeep… 😫 Actually side note, I’ve been thinking about this topic and we should make a thread for…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Days passed, and slowly, Leon regained some of the strength he had lost. On the second week, he was told he could work if he wanted to, and he did so with a will. It was wonderful to be with Rolf again, and the work was not draining a…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka
Two new chapters this week! They should be uploaded to the doc now. Excited to hear what y’all think!
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Yep, one of hers. It doesn’t have a lot to do with the book, but there is an otter who shows up with hisÂ
tridentgreat fork part way through. He’s possibly one of my favorite characters. -
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
sooo is anyone on rn?? XD @loopylin @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @esther-c
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Esther replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 3 months ago
@loopylin @keilah-h
I’ve never used Discord, but I’m open to it!! I wasn’t aware you could have separate channels and such.Keilah, Slack is mostly used for businesses, but I’ve also been a part of a writing camp that uses it and it works pretty well. The only problem is that if we use the free version, the message history is only 90 days.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Interesting POV switch. A new technique I tried out for telling long stories rather then having a ton of first-person dialogue. Let me know what y’all think.
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 9th
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks you two.
As for online, I don’t trust it. I’ve heard and seen too many online things get hacked for my liking. 😅
Thanks for the suggestion though!
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