Keilah H.

@freedomwriter76

Yessss my babies need each other. I feel bad for splitting them up. 😣 I think their sadness is rubbing off on me. (Or maybe my sadness is rubbing off on them?)

Anyway, yes, that would be awesome. But maybe we should let Serin wake up first? And Dante can meet Steve again! : D

@lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @m…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 Hopefully this moves things along…

Ellie 

After a bit, Silvia finished patching up Serin’s arm. She informed everyone that Serin seemed to be doing better, and finally, people began to relax.

Since they had nothing else to do while they waited, they decided to try to get some slee…[Read more]

Hehe, yeah you guys are right, it’s probably a lot harder to follow without context. My only excuse for not giving you guys an earlier scene, is that I’m not completely satisfied with the beginning.

@thearcaneaxiom

Thank you! I thought you would be best to judge worldbuilding 😉

@keilah-h

Yeah, I have mentioned this story before. Lol, I bet…[Read more]

@keilah-h @freedomwriter76

I’m not really sure what to do, so, uh, here 😅

Cammie

Cammie watched from beside Milo as Crosshair turned sharply to Feather and spit out, “Are you seriously allowing him to-”

Feather stopped him with a whispered sentence and although he still seemed incredibly against going anywhere with the Colonel, he accepted it,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 I likely won’t have time until Friday because I still don’t know what the next challenge will be. (I was thinking maybe doing a third wheel challenge? Not sure exactly what that would be, but it sounded fun to me)

If you don’t want to wait that long, though, you could figure out and start the next round yourself. I could still…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Arabella: Since we were five, *smiles at November.* We’ve been best friends since we met. I remember it like it happened minutes ago…

November: *Rubs a hand on his neck, heat creeping into his cheeks. He grins goofily.*

Holy toothy cow, that was long. Sorry.

Tagsies?

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @folith-feolin @thearcaneaxiom @esther-c @keilah-h @anyoneelsewannareadthismouthfulofasnippet?

@loopylin

Thanks so much! Yeah, I have no archery backround so I followed the reference with extra care XD

@princesachronicle22

Thanks so much! Glad you like it! XD

@keilah-h

XD thank you!

@thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h

Full honesty, I started this WIP maybe a couple months ago, so it’s not very far along yet worldbuilding-wise🤣. These are all things I’m going to have to work out. Thanks for mentioning them, because it makes things so much easier when I can have some kind of list of things to tweak or change.

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, I suppose that makes a little more sense for the Felisaro, though even with that, this is going to be a major hindrance to their development as a race in comparison to the others as @keilah-h mentioned, but there is a lot of interesting dynamics you could get into with that if you wanted. Using short range weapons still seems…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h

Wow! Thanks for the great advice! (And the more critiquing the better. it really does help)

To answer your question, yes, Quelin is definitely going to be a big part of the story. As for the whole thing about the thumbs, the Felisaro had to be extremely inventive to get past that. They basically started out with…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, that would make for some interesting history! Btw, @kyronthearcanin , do the Arcanin also use their mouths, or do they use some other method, like their magic?

@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just brainstorming, I guess.

Yep XD

@keilah-h

Right, yeah that would make sense, but don’t the Arcanin also walk on all fours? As their known as the kind you don’t want to recon with, being seen as by far the most powerful of all of them?

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin

Thanks! The issue with that though is it seems already pretty well established that the Felisaro somehow get around this, and are quite advanced. Unless they did take longer to advance, or maybe even piggy backed of from some of the others, but even that would come with a wide set of difficulties, going back again to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

Elissa

The man turned to her the second she spoke, giving her a smile. “Ah, I do not believe I have had the pleasure.” He then bowed with the same smile on his face. “I am Colonel James Matthew Hitchens of the Royal British Army, madam.”

He seemed… fine, but seeing how Feather and Crosshair had reacted and the thi…[Read more]

@loopylin

Heres my characters entry! @keilah-h if you dont mind I might borrow some of your questions 😀

Mike: Aright! Here is the next two people , Sam Smith and this stunning lady, Jean Walton!

Jean: *Laughs* Im not stunning. (So all of you guys know, Jean is a really pretty person)

Sam: *Clenches his fists and sighs deeply* I already hate…[Read more]

@keilah-h @freedomwriter76

(I’ve barely met Hitchens and he’s already making me mad)

Elissa

Elissa looked back and forth at Crosshair and the other man getting increasingly closer as they argued. She didn’t understand most of what they were saying but could tell there was some history.

Elissa was about to speak up when Feather stepped in…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I relate to the crumb phobia so much… lol

@joy-calle

Hey, I’m an INFP too! Although technically I border on INFJ; half the time I get the one, half the other XD

@keilah-h

Thanks!

And wow, that’s a great idea! I’ve read both Warriors and Wings of Fire (up until… a certain point? I don’t know how long they’ll keep going…), but never thought of actually doing it myself. Thanks again for the awesome idea! I will definitely get to work on that. If I ever post it, I’ll definitely tag you! 😃

@freedomwriter76

Oops, Aliens autocorrected to Allies. That’s the thing I’m most sensitive to in movies. Ok, good to know! Yeah, maybe one day I’ll watch them. I’ve never seen a marvel movie in my life so… same as other marvel movies doesn’t help me a whole lot XD

Ok I like that they let you figure out Bucky’s backstory instead of just showing…[Read more]