@keilah-h
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Ridley
Ridley held a hand against his throat, the laughter completely dead on his lips. He scrubbed furiously at his tears, body trembling.
And then…
Footsteps.
His heart pounded as he leapt to his feet, eyes wide in the darkness. The flecks of gold encircling the air grew thin, until they were nothing more then shadows on the w…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @awsumfaith @anyone
Not gonna lie I have no idea how those tags didn’t work last time. 😕
Here’s the next bit of the Dragonsbane Society:
Tali pressed a rough cloth to her temple, where Brycen had hit her. The gash had mostly stopped bleeding by now, but it still stung. Atticus paced the tent, and…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, for Eclipse, he’s sort of an antihero, so… I don’t have as much of that problem. I do, however, have a villain that really gets on my nerves, and so I figured writing about him in a castle would end up kind of crazy. 😅🤣
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h yea he can meet Ridley! I’ll RP as him later 😊
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Elissa
“Maybe we can find that? Get some fresh air?” Feather finished, telling them about the courtyard.
“Oh,” Elissa spoke, stretching her arms. “Fresh air. That sounds nice.” She didn’t know how long she had been inside the castle, but it had felt like a while and she hadn’t been outside once since she first…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Thank you!! I’ve been sick all day, but that writing session really cheered me up 😛
Sounds exactly like what he deals with XD Although dragons are definitely a bit more of a rarity in his field.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone
Here’s the next section on Jade. It’s sort of small.
Jade wrapped her cloak tighter around herself, shivering in the bitter wind. The trip to Brekya would be a long one, but it seemed necessary. Dragon scouts were there, dragons that had used some kind of ma…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I like the wings! And the webbed hands are cool.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, he would totally love that.
I think that would be super cool, not to throw my idea into the air or anything. I was writing down dialogue, and Thorn mentioned that the boys would be roommates – and I just stopped, and was like, wait, is that a thing here?
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
He sounds cool!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @sarafini @esther-c so….what if we did make it a boarding school situation? Maybe it’s announced? The school has been keeping a large surprise and renovation a secret and it’s revealed to be dorms?
We can then choose who has who has roommates! We can even cross charries with each other? Maybe Leo, Riker…[Read more]
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Light Warrior Pen replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I’m a fan of the paranoid dragon
Everyone else:
Your characters are awesome!
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @anyone else on here.
Okay, here’s my insane anti-hero
Name: Violet Maxwell
Occupation: thief/break-in expert
Looks: Brunette hair,…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah!
I think I’m gonna go with Tali as the shifter.Brycen’s POV can then be sort of misleading, because you might expect it to be him, but idk.@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone
Here’s the next part of the Dragonsbane Society!
Brycen met Aiden at the Badger just as the…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
(that’s everyone right?)
KUN’EN
He was very confused. One moment, Kun’en had been perfectly content eating late meal in the mess hall after teaching spear lessons to his favorite mongrels, the next he’d fallen backward into Depth knew where.
The room…[Read more]
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Light posted an update 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @euodia-vision @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @sarafini @whalekeeper @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @joy-calle @felicity @awsumfaith @esther-c @keilah-h @whalekeeper @anyone-else-I’m-forgetting-sorry
Hey everyone!! So…I’ve been thinking. And honestly, I’ve been s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I couldn’t decide lol. I had a hard enough time deciding my own villain. 🤣🤣
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h I also like the score it’s but now you have two votes for one and two votes for the other XD so ur back to ur indecisiveness 😂
OKAY I AM GOING TO INTRODUCE MY CHARRIES!!!
so they will be from different timelines because uhh unless something changes Kainda actually dies in the series….😅 but yea.
As for Ridley, I actually think I’m…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I should probably have my characters run into someone.
@esther-cSam and Madeline
A man suddenly jumped out and pointed a gun at the two of them.
“Don’t move.”
Sam tensed up and was about ready to grab the gun out of the man’s hand, but he froze when he felt Madeline’s cold hand on his arm. She smiled sweetly up at the stranger.…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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I’ll miss you, and will be praying for you while you’re on this break. =)
I hope it goes wonderfully! ❤️❤️❤️
Okay! Yes, hope all goes well for you, hugs and loves!!! (:
That’s awesome that your taking some time off for yourself! We all look forward to seeing when you get back!
Ok! Have a good break light, we love you! I’ve been thinking about maybe doing the same lol
I’ll miss you so much, but I hope you have a good break. 😊 Can’t wait for when you come back!! ❤️❤️ I’ll be praying for you. 💖🙏🏻
Have a good break! I’ve noticed a lot of people have been doing that lately, and I honestly can’t blame them. Sometimes it’s good to step back for a bit.
Looking forward to your return, but hope you have a good break! Keep pressing on the upward way! ❤️❤️