@keilah-h
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I’m so glad you liked it! Yes, one was a Stephen ending and one was a Daniel! lol.
I loved the descriptions of the different soldiers’ uniforms and stuff for some reason
Oh so do I! Honestly, I was thinking, “Keilah is going to like this,” as I was writing the descriptions! lol
This is gonna sound like a weird ask, but if you e…
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae@loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @Esther-c @jonas @theducktator
Okay, so right now some of the votes are tied so Kefa and I decided to extend the deadline to the 3rd, so please vote. We’ll release the results around then and hopefully have the next chapter out within the next few weeks.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
thank you!! I don’t care for a million subscribers, I’d rather have just a few that actually care about my work.
Of course! That’s a really good point, I like that a lot. Being famous is overrated.
yeah it takes a super long time. But at least the models stay the same and all you have to do is move them instead of having to redraw the c…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Sorry, my devices were *cough* abruptly removed from my life so this is late.
yep! I have a channel! It’s called The Slate Dragon. There’s nothing really worthwhile on there yet, just me testing stuff out.
That’s so cool, I’ll have to check it out!
I use Blender for animating. It was easier to learn than I thought, but it is pretty…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Who’s turn is it to RP?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
OKAY!
Well, thank you very much to any of y’all who survived all the way to the end. I’m excited to hear y’alls thoughts and I’m looking forward to lost of feedback. Here are some questions that I had. (I may have looked at your file for some question st…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
The hours passed, but there was little dread in them for Joseph. Beric slept most of the time, and when Joseph laid a hand against the boy’s forehead, he found it was still hot with fever. His own eyes burned, and he was sure Stephen was little better.
Afte…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
well, it’s 2025, but I have one section left to post, so I think I kinda did it….. in a kinda didn’t way. lolololol.
Keep an eye out as I shall be posting THE END of TVON today!
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hybridlore replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Aww, your relationship with your brother sounds so sweet.
Same—we played with our stuffed animals too. We had maybe thirty of them between us, and they all belonged to a “pack” with an alpha, and a beta, etc. (Me and my sister were Erin Hunter fans.) We acted out whole storylines—probably enough to fill a novel xD.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you see the google search “synonyms of the word ‘undisturbed'” and a list of synonyms appear unbidden in your mind.
….unperturbed, anyone? Unruffled?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yes, it’s supposed to be fictionalized early church. I read Foxes Book of Martyrs, The Martyrs Mirror, and Acts before I wrote these, so I draw a lot out of those. In fact, a lot of the situations are real from real people’s accounts.
Some I wrote, some are old, old hymns from the underground church.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
same! It hurts! But I like to keep the story real.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Executing a teenager and a pregnant woman is something even I would shy away from writing lol
hmmmmm.
I’ve killed my fare share of teenagers….. and a few little kids……………..
but yeah I like the hymn at the back idea! maybe if you have any recipes, or games, or other things that you put an emphasis on through the story,…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
wow! haven’t heard from you in a little while! I was wondering if you were still reading!
I think I plan to keep it. It honestly is a very special thing and a special part of the story, and I feel like it really shows their faith as whole as embodying some of the key messages of the book. I have actually ended each of the books in this…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/31/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The next morning, Joseph was startled awake by the sound of keys jangling in the lock. He sat up quickly, jolting Amelia awake.
Beric rolled over and yawned.
At the other side of the room, David was a…
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
That reminds me of a really cool, sweet mom at church (one of my favorite people) who approached me with a YA fantasy book. A friend of hers, whom I didn’t know, had written it and wanted some feedback from teenage girls.
I and my friend read it, and we coincidentally had one favorite character that stood out. She was…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/30/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(it’s loonnnggggeee)
“Would you pass the bread?” Stephen asked.
Joseph handed it to him, and Stephen cut a slice. “Amelia, this is truly an amazing supper.”
“It sure is,” Joseph agreed.
Amelia smiled…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 5 months ago
Weird. I can’t even remember how they let me know I joined… probably an email. It’s worth checking.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Cool, what animation program/app do you use?
I have a little saga going with him befriending a How To Train Your Dragon night fury lol, but I haven’t released it on youtube yet
I love that XD. Do you have a YouTube channel where you post the videos?
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TheShadow replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Huh, weird.
also I was just relistening to Sniper’s lines for the sheer fun of it and I just realized he sounds a little like Buck from Ice Age.
No way!! XD that’s hilarious.
now I’m gonna have to animate him with an eye patch and a dinosaur
as if he wasn’t already the only thing I’ve been animating lately eheheheheh
Lol, do you usual…[Read more]
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