Keilah H.

@keilah-h  @freed_and_redeemed

Thank you guys so much for the encouragement! I honestly didn’t know how you guys would react to a fanfic including faith in it (I even asked my best friend if this was something you’re allowed to do lol)

And to answer your concerns Keilah (which by the way thank you for mentioning them cause I needed to thin…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I will just make things easy for you and give you a new link to the feedback file.

TNPT: The Cost – Second Draft Feedback

Thanks!

@keilah-h

(I’m not gonna write a song for them right now lol, maybe later)

Lol

@keilah-h

like seriously, fictional characters are some of the most exploited things on the planet.

Exactly, it’s really disturbing.

I joke a ton about being possessive over my fanfic characters, but they have it lucky. In my domain I don’t force them to do things like most other writers.

It’s weird how some do, I kind of feel bad for those types…[Read more]

@keilah-h

thank you! And yea I remember that scene too. Not sure if that was a high point or a low point in my writing journey haha

I can’t either lol

Sometimes I kinda want to turn my story back into comic form, but I would not have the patience for that so you just get random scenes lol

Oh yeah, you’ve gotta have a special desire to do that cau…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Poor choice of words XD

@keilah-h

thank you much!! This is super helpful!

@stephie and @keilah-h

Are either of you going to be filling out the feedback document I provided earlier?

@keilah-h

Yeah, I can just carry him in my backpack and bo human would question it. XD

@keilah-h

Ha, now I remember. I want a banshee, that would be cool.

@ellette-giselle

Well, this is slightly tricky because I don’t date and don’t believe in dating at all. BUT, that is a side point. You’re characters are dating, so lets see. My standards on this are higher then most, so I won’t give you exactly what I would do, but a general…

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@keilah-h

Wonderful! lower end of page 36

@keilah-h

You still willing to do those questions?

I’m walking an odd line here…….. I don’t want to pester, but you told me to remind you, so I don’t know what to do! 😂

If you don’t want to then no problem at all!

@keilah-h

Much better then the last one you showed us! This is really good! The guy and girl differences evened out really nicely! The expressions are also good.

@whalekeeper @keilah-h

I used to be obsessed with it, and I still think books 1-6 were good, but after that it’s just too much drama. I don’t think the author knows what she’s doing anymore with regards to plot, and she’s just dragging it on. I have to give her credit for her characters and dialogue though. I may be frustrated, but at least I’m not bored.

@keilah-h

Yep! I definitely like the fantasy creatures best, especially Elwin’s pet (I forget what it’s called). And the Trolls, with their cool backwards aging.
The plot is kind of nonexistent and I’m always screaming at the book, but I’ve learned to enjoy the drama. I actually tend to read a few chapters every week, rather than finishing it…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Seven for me as well.

@keilah-h

I never hang out on fanfic sites for exactly that reason, hence why my TF2 one is in a google doc and I just send it to people who ask about it

Smart decision. Fanfic sites are a scary place, if there’s any restrictions on those places then they have to be the most minimal in existence.

@keilah-h

Ooh, that looks so good!! I remember that scene…

@keilah-h

It’s usually a steaming pile of horse nuggets, is what it is.

Yes, this is a better analogy.

@keilah-h

oh thank you!!!!

I have another one in the works but I wanna add sound to it and make it a bit longer before I post it.

Your welcome, and can’t wait for that!!

I have yet to show my brother, I’ll probably end up showing it to him sometime today or tomorrow.