Keilah H.

@keilah-h

I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious.

Yes…. but the only time they were seen was in Clonabay, and i mentioned the amount of different cultures that are all mixed in there. No one is really noticing anything in that city. Ya know? Plus, Leon and Rolf are in such a bad state that the people of the Empire…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Hmm. So what might be confusing?

You want to try and bounce your thoughts off of me?

@keilah-h

You read the very newest section from today?

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NEXT SECTION!!!

(If I was Freedom I’d be posting trigger warnings. But y’all have been amply warned.)

Leon woke the next morning to find one of the men cutting the ropes that bound his wrists. One arm came free, and Leon gasped from the pain that…

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@keilah-h

Lolololol.

@keilah-h

lolol.

Yup.

Oh don’t worry. Things will be bad.

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @grcr @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @trailblazer @hybridlore @rae @anyone-else-idk-lol

Possible (probable) scene for Book #2 of my fantasy series idea🤭

let me know what y’all think👀

The Mercenary camp seemed naught much fond of having guests.

Couldn’t they at the very least be w…

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@whalekeeper
Thank you! Maybe I should have tucked Alan’s elbow under the gate.

@keilah-h
Thanks for the tip on arm length!

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NEXT SECTION!!!

“So, what do you think we’ll encounter in Clonabay?” Rolf asked.

“Sin and darkness,” Leon replied in a low voice.

Rolf glanced over his shoulder. “I hope Roland’s alright. I’ve seen him get hurt plenty of times, and this is about th…

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@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka HIIIII!!!

Yessss Callan is…not good XD yall want me to post another scene?

@keilah-h

I really like them, they’re good!! Nice job!!

@keilah-h

Okay. You kind of confirmed my suspicions (room for improvement 👍), but I’m glad Alan’s arms look fine to you. Thank you!

@theducktator @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Thank you all of you!

@liberty

Okay…. I could wait I day.

@keilah-h

Glad you found that interesting!!

@linus-smallprint

Have you read the latest section I posted yesterday? I couldn’t tell from the feedback how far you still were. (trying to figure out how long I need to pause.)

@keilah-h

Awesome, thank you!

@ellette-giselle @whaley @keilah-h @theducktator @stephie

Finished a drawing of Alan and Martha! I meant to post this yesterday, but couldn’t log into Kingdom Pen for some reason. But now here it is!

@keilah-h

Arcane and Alder are good name switches! I like them. Also, are you going to keep the Payne and Pythonos references? I think you should; when you publish your book people will be like “oh, this is an expansion on that universe.”

I think I will keep the Payne/Pythonos. I agree, it would be cool!!!!

Thanks, they fit really well and I lik…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Not sure. It’s been going on ever since they hit the new town.

Maybe page 14?

I’ll have to look if you can’t find it.

@keilah-h

I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.

Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.

lso, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of…

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