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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@keilah-h   @hybridlore
Exactly. She is not a love interest.
Also, another reason her and julian interacting a lot wouldn’t be a good idea is because she has not had good involvment with men so she is really, really raw in that area and needs extra space.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yep that’s true.
YES!! Thank you! It is!
If you can pause a moment in your sorrow over Leon, what did you think of the scene with Julian and Rosalind?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I’ve tried. I think she enjoys tormenting us 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah. A friend told me to split it or else he’ll wait to read it when he’s in solitary confinement. 😂
Yeah! I’m glad you mentioned Julian. Most of the focus seems to be on Leon. I wonder why………… 🤔🤣
Do you think I’m really gonna tell you that?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!
One evening, Julian was walking home alone from visiting a family and bringing a basket of food Adeline had prepared for them. It was growing dusk, and he was almost out of the alleys when a voice hailed him. “You, stranger, it looks like y…
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
btw I hope my writing proved satisfactory lol
I actually haven’t read it read it yet, but I’ll read it the first chance I get
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
it’s doing it to me right now, how about you?
It was doing it too me like 15ish minutes ago but now it’s cleared up
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ
@keilah-h @whalekeeper @esther-c @grcr @theducktator @theshadow @anyone-else
I JUST WROTE A NEW CHAPTERRR -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Well thank you!! Children characters always drive me insane. I dislike them so much because they are written so badly. We either have super tall toddlers or super short adults.
It’s something I really try to get right, so thanks for mentioning it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Really? How so?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I’ve always found that a wonderful way to connect with children and help them understand. I’m glad you liked it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!
The days passed, and Leon threw himself whole heartedly into the work. At first, the idea of completing at task well for someone who owned him was revolting. But after one long evening of prayer, Leon felt in his heart what was right, and…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @theshadow
New chapter is out!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Mission Accomplished.
You should have a new email
I surprisingly ate a whole carton of blackberries while having this conversation, lol
Now I’m hungry
are you going post that art or not?
Nope. Not tonight. I have to scan it in, and at the moment, I can’t do that. I’ll get on it tomorrow
I’m posting the ice cream one btw
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@keilah-h lol, will do
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oh wow!
so in order to exert his power he needs to steal from her. Interesting.
yeah, he gets power off of the lies she believes. but she doesn’t know that yet.
ohhhh! ok that makes sense.
I feel terrible for her. That life seems excruciating.
yeah…it is *cries*
Wait whattt
Iverrrr 🧐
PLOT TWIST BWAHAHAA
What’s the twist? I didn’t see a twist, but that might’ve just been me.
Because TIGIN showed up…the same Pythonos that tried to kill Liv in the desert, and the same Pythonos that held Ottoline captive…he survived the tidal wave and he knows Iver!
Oh I’d forgotten his name.
ohhhh okay! so it’s all coming together.
YESSSSS
bwahahahahha
Oh my goodness, poor Sef. *is slightly traumatized* Lilitu, save her!
I KNOWWWWW
XXD