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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
“They’re back!” yelled a child’s voice.
Leon scrambled to his feet and ran for the entrance to the cave. Roland, Liesl and several others followed. They stepped out into the evening light just in time to see the hunt…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, true.
At least it was cold enough that it killed him pretty quick.
Ugh. I sound so heartless and not at all like I was tearing up AGAIN when I edited that scene, even though I’ve been over it more times then I can count.
Anyways.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 25 out!
I don’t think I want this to be James. This is too similar to Eric. Both characters feel unappreciated, and grow depressed because they don’t fit in and feel. The only thing different is James has hope in The Saviour so he’s less self centered and is more outgoing.…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator
New chapters!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
“We need more meat,” Rolf said. He and several others were sitting about in the main cavern, eating breakfast.
“Are we running low again?” Julian asked.
“Yes, and we’ve hunted this area clean.”
“Then let’s pla…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yes, that would be sad.
I guess we’ll never know.
I like the cave stuff too! It’s a fun change.
yes, I love simple weddings.
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
😂 Right. Writers are odd in certain things.
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
Really?! Why? I noticed some YWWs doing that…and I wondered, “Why?”
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
He’s the spiritual one, the one that’s always reminding the other characters to trust God or to appreciate their surroundings. He loves animals and plants and being out in nature. He’s also athletic.
Spot on!
(and don’t worry, calling adult or near adult male characters “boy” is a common thing among writers)
Have you ever seen people…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank you! 🙂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Thanks!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 31st
The EmpireIt is growing dark. I am sitting beside Leon, who is tossing in fevered sleep. Last night we were attacked by wolves, and several of us w…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m scared for calculus. 😬
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Thanks guys ☺️
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @linus-smallprint @esther-c @liberty @theshadow @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @theducktator
Hey guys (well you’re mostly gals). Would you be interested in a goal-focused chat where we practice our individual writing skills and chat about…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 13th
The EmpireWe are all settled down inside a cave complex the Lord led us to. It has begun to really snow in earnest outside, but we have wood for a fir…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 24!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
*cackles* I want to know.
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