@keilah-h
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 REUBEN NOOOOOO!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
The threesome continued on for a little bit, walking fairly slow. In silence.
Paxton glanced at Grimm. The dark-haired young man seemed deep in thought, brows creased and lips pulled thin. Paxton frowned.
Nyx tensed, ears flicking. He turned from…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Grimm
“W-Wulf?”
Grimm glanced at the white-haired boy, still clutching his leg with one hand, Hope in the other.
“Hm?”
“I…I’m sorry…” He whispered.
Nyx shifted on Grimm’s shoulder. Grimm frowned. “What for?”
Paxton stopped in his tracks, fingers loosely gripping Grimm’s jeans. He sniff…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon yall on?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
OOF…. Reuben… 😭 I’m sorry Grimm didn’t mean to do that…but you’ve just hurt him too….
Nyx
“Do you even care about anyone!?”
One of the younger men was being held back.
Reuben.
Paxton gasped, eyes even wider now. He let out a cry, stepping back. Wolfgang gasped, turning t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Vulkasin was skilled in his work. It took a while, but Leo’s wound was patched up rather nicely, considering what little they had to work with.
Still, Grimm couldn’t help but see the open wound on the man’s abdomen, bleeding out. Blood that ebbed and flowed, reminding him of a sim…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@kishka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h btw everyone I hope y’all know Grimm wasn’t trying to be mean at all!! Tho the others may have taken it that way, he just wanted to diffuse the situation. He used to lead a rebellion and yes they were mostly full of children who didn’t know much and so he’s not the greatest at speaking to groups and doesn’t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
All our poor charies! Seriously, authors can be cruel sometimes.
(The medical stuff in my books is not purely medieval. However, much of it is, so if something seems a bit weird, that’s probably why.)
The twins
Vulkasin seemed to have lost track of the conversations around him.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h hoo boy. Grimm’s gonna have to break this up… @elishavet-pidyon
Grimm
Leo erupted…
The fire and guilt in his eyes so familiar…
Grimm flinched but it was barely visible. He knew his friends probably saw it, but doubted anyone else did. He…he could see himself so vividly in Leo’s glare.
And then Crossh…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@keilah-h oops my bad!!! Lol!! Also Corvina is an antagonist. She hasn’t been redeemed yet, but throughout the series she keeps showing the reader more and more of how she can be, and even now she’s showing more of that side of herself, but she’s still considered a bad guy/the opposition (especially to some like Grimm)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
November
“November…” The ginger started, feeling a weight on his shoulder. He looked over at Riker’s concerned gaze. “Are you alright?”
“Hm? O-Oh! Y-Yea…sorry…Just, spaced out for a second I guess,” he chuckled. “Umm…do all of you want to keep going? Or…umm…I don’t know…” he shrugged.
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I can’t wait to see the drawing of Kad! He has such a cool character design 😊❤️
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Eddie and Ellie
“I’ll go first, just in case. Everyone, fall in behind.” Wayne said and the door swung open.
Kad suddenly screeched and ran past Ellie, making her jump and tense up. He took to the air and flew around a few times. So much for Wayne’s caution. Ellie thought, a bit irritated, but seeing Kad so happy e…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomeriter76 @keilah-h
Grimm
Paxton’s eyes grew wide at Vulkasin’s sudden outburst, he ducked, burying his head a bit. Vulkasin winced as his brother sent him a glare.Paxton peeked out, “Why…Why d-did s-someone h-hurt you…?” He whispered.
Grimm walked up, “Pax…he may not…want to discuss it. You understand.”
Pax…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h anyone here?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka ugh the twins are so sweet 😭 @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Grimm had watched it all in silence, heart gripped with emotion, though his face didn’t dare give it away. At least, not to those who didn’t know him.
“You good?” Nyx hopped to the floor, nudging Grimm’s boot with his paw.
Grimm nodded, still keeping an eye on Paxton a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
AWWWW!!! *Sobs*
Zlatan
“I…I forgive you.” Paxton looked up at him, his eyes filling with tears before he buried his head in Zlatan’s stomach.
I forgive you.
Zlatan gently lifted the boy in his arms, spreading instant fire across his shoulders. Those wounds had been for children, and somehow, he…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka AWWWW 😭 @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Paxton
Zlatan rose back to his feet, one arm still wrapped around Paxton. The white-haired boy gazed up at him, bright eyes blinking. He didn’t understand everything, but he knew enough to see…
To feel…
“I-It’s alright, whatever you did…it’s al-alright…” He smiled, ice blue eyes sparkling, meanin…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Yes, Zlatan is gold, Vulkasin greeny-yellow.
Zlatan
Soft arms wrapped around him, pulling him back from the black cell. He opened his eyes to see Paxton looking up at him. He swallowed.
But what was the little lad saying? That everything would be fine, that he shouldn’t be…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka AHHH NO!! @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
The little boy stepped back, gasping. Everyone seemed at a loss for words.The dark haired man just suddenly began….
To cry…
Had…had Paxton done…said something wrong?
Paxton watched as his brother reached for him, then recoiled, as of afraid the slightest touch wo…[Read more]
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