Keilah H.

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

Ok, all y’all who have stuck with me through all of this, I have a question.

Is anyone willing to help me write a blurb? I keep trying and nothing sounds write? Anyone have ideas or examples?

Also, I’ll try to get another section tomorrow. I’m a little distracted with the publishing process of…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I APOLOGIZE IF MY RANTING MAKES YOU THINK THAT.

It’s fine

you really don’t think it’s a real mess?

No, not really. It’s not perfect, but I still think it’s pretty good.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow

This week is a little busier for me. I still have time to write, but chapters may arrive a little later than expected. My church does a camp for families this week and I may be going out there for a couple of days. Also, I am a little stuck right now, trying to figure out how to introduce…[Read more]

@keilah-h

that was a terrible joke i’m sorry

Lol it’s fine.

And I’m enjoying it a lot really, I like how you portray the characters. Trust me, it’s really not that bad, and if you’re having fun with it then that’s what matters. If you want I can stop though.

@keilah-h @whoever-cares

I have a scene you might possibly like.

“What do you want?” inquired a strange masculine voice behind him.

Nahim swung around, his crystal sword hitting a breastplate, damaging the paint. Nahim leaned back in surprise. This man seemed to be wearing mithaln! The man, his face covered by a helmet of the style commonly use…

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@keilah-h That’s a perfect name! I named mine Cyrus.

@whalekeeper

I’ve always struggled with drawing a cartoon version of myself but now I have to XD

I would love to see that if you do end up drawing it :]

@mineralizedwritings

Aw, thanks so much!

And you’re so good at drawing toes. They are the bane of my existence.

XD Probably because I’ve bee…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ohh, ok that makes a lot more sense now.

I may or may not have finished reading it

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

One afternoon, Aaron was sitting on the edge of his bed, studying his Bible, when Noah stepped into the room, a Bible in his own hands. “Aaron, can I talk to you?”

“Yeah sure,” said Aaron, motioning to the bed.

Noah sat down. “Aaron, I was reading through the Bible, cover to cover as you sugge…

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@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

At last, the curfew was slowly lifted and the citizens were allowed to return to a more normal life. Never were they allowed to leave the city. The Imperial soldiers began causing problems, turning families out of their homes to accommodate the Officers. All of the large building taken to quarter…

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@keilah-h

Your tag not working.

@ellette-giselle
I promise both of you that I do not agree with the “kids always know better” thing either. I have been annoyed a bit that my book is this way, with characters who either disagree with their parents (like Martha and Tyn), or are separated from their parents (like Alan and Oliver). One day, I’ll try…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

here we go. Again, love feedback on Aaron here. I’m feeling pretty confidant, so it might all come crashing down. XD

The next evening found Aaron on his knees again. He found he was spending a lot of time that way, and he wasn’t finding any peace. Every night he cried out questions, and never o…

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@keilah-h

(also…..LOL the bit about the phone dying, that’s a trope in EVERY story where you have a leader who has to communicate with your characters from a distance)

I know! 😀

there was literally a seen when Phil’s brother Andy was like, “Hang on Phil, before we don ANYTHING check your battery.”

@keilah-h

Yeah, completely. I just can’t stand the hidden message of kids know best in just about every adventure movie or book. And Box car kids and Hardyboys literally got chucked across the room because I was SICK of the kids know everything.

There is a series, The Baker Family Adventures, that is a breath of fresh air!! It’s about a…[Read more]

@keilah-h

that was by FAR my favorite episode!! SOOOOOO good!!! like, gave me chills kind of good!!

@keilah-h

I’m glad you liked it! Yeah, it is sad. Poor Edwin. and poor Turin of course. Poor Sabina too!

And the “feeling like he’s a failure, stemming from pride” actually makes a weird amount of sense.

I know right?

@keilah-h

wow! That was interesting!

The chapter, or the glitch?

@ellette-giselle

In the beginning, God created Grammar and it was good.

Then there were grammar issues, and they was bad.

I’m trying (except when writing what Oliver Says). Although, since this is an earlier draft, I’m also focusing on other things, such as character…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper

k, here’s a new part.

@calyhuge @otherworldlyhistorian @thearcaneaxiom @linus-smallprint

Apologies for tagging y’all. Hope you don’t mind. I’ve started employing the advice y’all gave me, and I wanted to see what you fella’s think before I go any farther with it. Does Aaron still seem like a guy. I mean, would…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Your tag did not work, so here we go again.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow

Next chapter. You can all breath now (until you reach the end of this chapter of course). This covered less than what I was hoping to, there proved to be too much to go into one chapter, but that is all right. I will see if I can get Chapter the 13th – The Self-Proclaimed Guardian to you…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @theloonyone @stephie @theshadow @theducktator @keilah-h @grcr @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian

Awesome! This is perfect.

Ok, I have one. This will be mostly for guys, but if any girl’s have ideas…[Read more]