@keilah-h
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Thanks ☺️
Never the less, there were also some holes that needed to be filled, and some things I wanted to change, so we’re trying for round two😁
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
@keilah-h Crocodile Dundee is free on YouTube rn. It has a little bit of language and stuff but much better than more modern movies usually do.
I watched it with Cgecko and all I could think about was how it was totally up your alley! -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
No prob. Like I said to Koshka, I have a weird weakened schedule, and I often forget others don’t.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @theshadow @rae @princesachronicle22 @kyronthearcanin
Joy
”I would only prank one of my siblings like that,” said Joy. If Athan ever got a girl, she’d have to do something like this to him. Stephen had his “I have an evil plan” look. “Stephen, don’t do anything overly stupid.”
“Me, stupid?” Stephen shook his head. “Never.” He turned…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
(Oh my goodness he’s adorable!!)
Rory
“Lelo!” A high pitched wail sounded down the hall.
Rory jumped and whipped around. Something shot passed him and slammed into Leo. Rory took a quick step forward, but Leo didn’t seem to be fighting this thing. In fact, when Rory looked, he saw it was a child. the boy was sob…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Wait tool? *Immediately starts thinking Fork! Factory!*
Leo
The elevator doors slid open to reveal the upstairs hallway. A long line of red and blue doors stood before them. Leo turned left towards room 204 and its dead lightbulb.
“I need to go take care-”
“Lelo!” A high pitched wail sounded behind him. He…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Rory
“You don’t have to come tomorrow,” Ellie said softly.
Rory hesitated, looking down at her.
Ellie continued. “But if you do, you know you won’t be the only quiet person there. And there will always be people willing to teach you how to dance.”
Of the twins, Rory decided right there that he liked her the bes…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@keilah-h is Hunter waiting for them at the top?
The twins
“I haven’t been asked yet, but I’m not worried. I’ll find someone. Ellie, however, well, you just met Marcel,” Eddie grinned at her sister.
Ellie ignored her. Instead she looked up at Rory. “You don’t have to come tomorrow,” she said softly. “But if you do,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I know. XD
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Rory
Before Rory could think of something to say that might help him out of the mess, Leo broke in.
“If I had a bonny, I would not be taking her to see the school plumbing system, which is where I be if somebody tries to flush their homework again. Besides, I don’t think the mai…[Read more]
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@keilah-h
Hey!!!! Sorry I didn’t respond right away. I’m on a trip 😅 I can talk now tho. Not much is going on.But yes, I am starting draft two. I’m not even a full two pages in 🥲.
I’ve mostly just been trying to evaluate what needs to be tweaked and such. My biggest critique is that its too slow.
I am open to any of your constructive feedback…[Read more] -
Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Poor Rory. XD
Leo
The poor kid’s face turned red as he dragged the toe of his shoe around and around. Eddie seemed to be trying to smother more laughter.
But there was something more than just embarrassment in Rory’s eyes. Leo decided to intervene. “If I had a bonny, I would not be taking her to see the…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Lol probably
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I think I was the last post, so I’ll let someone else go (although if no one else wants to, I can write a quick RP)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Here’s the next section.
Time passed, and for a while things seemed normal. Aaron, Noah, and Darrien worked odd jobs here and there, scraping just enough coins together to pay for the needs of each day. However, that was soon to change.
“Aaron! Play with us!” begged Joseph.
“I haven’t got time,” replied Aaro…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Rory
Rory flushed and looked from one girl to the other. “I… um… no. I’ve never done that before. Where I come from things are pretty strict. We don’t dance, and we certainly don’t… what do you call it? Date.” He shrugged. “So, yeah.” Rory looked at the floor and drew circles with the toe of his shoe.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h
The twins
Eddie burst into a fit of giggles. Ellie rolled her eyes.
“No, a date. Have you asked a girl out yet?”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @koshka
Rory
The elevator lifted with a jerk and Rory grabbed one of the bars, a wave of dizziness passing over him. Prepare for takeoff, came a voice in his mind. Strap helmet, position guns… Rory shook his head.
“So…” began one of the twins, “Either of you boys got dates for the dance yet?”…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h
sorry, I forgot about this
The twins
Ellie hesitated, watching Marcel leave, but soon she scurried after her sister into the elevator.
The doors shut, and the four passengers stood in silence. The elevator rattled and lifted.
“So…” Eddie couldn’t stand silence for very long. “Either of you boys got dates…[Read more]
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lol
welp, you found the inspiration for Sniper haha (at least according to the game developers)
I’ve seen bits and pieces of it, thanks to my dad.
It’s where this famous scene came from, right? (a.k.a. The Video That Finally Made Me Commit To Doing Blender Animations)
yeah now you know how deep my obsession goes.
one combination of a video game character I may or may not have a severe crush on and a classic movie got me learning animation and that could easily get me a job.
my life is strange.
funny how I’m willing to admit my darkest secret over a screen to a person I’ve never met but right now my parents are barely aware the character exists.
Yeah, I get that. XD.
My parents don’t know too much either.
XD, yeah, that scene is one of the best. I honestly like it better in the live action though.
Well of course cause it’s the original. Plus that animator was doing it for fun and practice rather than actually recreating the scene haha
but yeah, the things we don’t tell our families lol. I’m glad I’m not the only one.