Keilah H.

@linus-smallprint.  @keilah-h

Update.

Hey, my cover artist JUST SENT THE COMPLETED COVER!

It’s brilliant!

Anyone want to see?!?!

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @theshadow @loopylin

As predicted, I am still working on Chapter the 19th this week. In the mean time, I got some older artwork of Martha and Stripe to share with you. (I will do Stripe is a separate post). I will put these into my Google albums as well.

I relised I completely forgot to describe…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint.  @keilah-h

Hey, my cover artist just sent in the rough idea placement sketch. Would you care to take a look?

@keilah-h

Thank you, he tries his best.

@loopylin

I thought so XD

Marcel

Marcel went back to chewing, then checked himself. “Boyfriend?”

The little girls scooted closer and giggled loudly.

One of them crooned, “Do you want to… kiss??”

Marcel flicked a finger, and a burst of wind blew the kindergartner in the face. “Ask your dad first,…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, I have no explanation for why he can talk yet lol. I just wanted a talking cat. Came up with these characters just a couple days ago.

cool, I had a sentient cat like that in one of my old stories. He couldn’t talk in English, but he could write, and that’s how he communicated.

That sounds like a fun character idea

@keilah-h

I know! It’s not the story with Everton and Amidala though. This new idea was still in the works and just wasn’t working out the way I wanted it to.

Ok, awesome!! I”m excited to hear what she remembers!

@ellette-giselle

Oh no way! That’s so awesome! Okay, so it’s going to be in modern times, contemporary. I’m wondering how an Amer…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thank you so much!

@koshka @keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin

Rory

Rory trailed behind Leo and the girls, lost in his own whirlwind of thoughts. He finally noticed they had come to a stop and looked up.

They had come to an open door covered with large paper frogs. Inside a chorus of children were working their way through a simple rhyme. A middle-aged woman was…[Read more]

@keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin @ellette-giselle

*Nearly tags myself on accident*

Leo

“Sure.” He smiled down at the girls. Their tails were something to get used to, but he had seen weirder things here.

The hall was long and curved, so that in a few paces they had lost sight of the others. Soon the somber red doors have way to bright yellows…[Read more]

I’m fine with it! Glad someone finally RPd!

@koshka @keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin

Rory

Rory carefully moved so that his back was to the wall. The amount of people was starting to feel dangerous, especially since Rory could sense mots of them would be handy in a fight. He was still trying to get over the fact that strangers greeted each other…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @calyhuge

This group is kinda big and I’m getting a bit confused. Is it alright if we split up? If no you can ignore this rp

The Twins 

The girls crept closer to Leo, getting a bit overwhelmed by all the new people showing up, Ellie especially.

“Hey, Leo,” Ed said, “Wanna show us where the kindergarten classroom is?”

@keilah-h

Okay, I’m thinking I’m gonna keep it.

Yes, but oddly enough, when a God-fearing character dies in a story, I’m not usually as sad as I am at other characters’ deaths cause they’re in heaven (even though they don’t exist lol)

SAME!! I totally know what you’re saying!!

I know!! It is so sad! They would have been such a sweet couple.…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yep sort of. I meant guys dressing as girls, or vise versa. So yeah. It’s gross and called some pretty strong names in the Bible.

XD and I love wearing only dresses and skirts.

@keilah-h

I think the last RP was page 448?

@keilah-h

I think it’s your turn to RP in here?

@linus-smallprint   @keilah-h

Okay, here are the questions I had.

Where the characters believable?

Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?

What would you say was the message of the story?

What would you say my world view was?

Was there anything that seemed unbelievable or forced?

Is there anything that you w…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint   @keilah-h

Okay, here are the questions I had.

Where the characters believable?

Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?

What would you say was the message of the story?

What would you say my world view was?

Was there anything that seemed unbelievable or forced?

Is there anything that you w…[Read more]

@keilah-h

yay!! I’m glad you want to read more!!
question: what do you think of the Seven year jump forward ending?

were you sad Aaron died?

I love how that soldier–Adrian, I think?–wants to learn more about Aaron’s beliefs after he saw how brave he was before dying.

yes!! That was one of my favorite parts. Aaron’s last prayer was that God would…[Read more]

@keilah-h

She sounds fun. XD

I totally recommend looking into girl’s/guy’s different physiological in fighting. It’s pretty interesting if you find a decent source, and I know it’s helped with my characters.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @esther-c @koshka @loopy

Ok, Y’all. This topic has gone deep. XD Wow. That’s good though. We should really pull apart why we are writing what we are writing. I’m getting a fresh look at my own characters too.

There are many facets to what y’all are saying. I will say first off, that the reversal of the “da…[Read more]