@keilah-h
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
also I headcanon this is kinda what his voice sounds like, but with more hissy S’s:
How did I know it was going to be Sniper?
Glad I could help!
Sometimes I find all I need is someone else to hash out something in my story, and then I can say, “You know what, you’re totally wrong, thanks for clearing that up for m…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Ooh! I like how kunulfs, since they are cursed creatures that aren’t as God originally designed them, have messed up backbones by design. It makes it feel a bit more biologically sound, y’know?
That’s the idea. Book two and three are going to play with this more.
That voice clip you shared, that’s fun. I imagine him with a higher mor…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks!! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @rae @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @my-brain-has-forgotten-everyone-i-wanted-to-tag-loll @anyone-interested
A new story idea!! If any of y’all remember me introducing the characters of Audrey and Clayton in the Character Castle or elsewhere, this is their story, just totally revamped a…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Jitterz and His Coffee Mayhem in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Tagging ppl!
@ellette-giselle @jonas @whalekeeper @theshadow @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @grcr @keilah-h
Sorry if I’m annoying you guys.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @theshadow @loopylin
I was hoping to get this to you earlier, but I was having trouble writing the dialogue in this chapter for whatever reason. I’m still not quite happy with the first part or my title for this chapter, but let’s see what you all think.
Hopefully Chapter the 20th – The…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
wIaT whAt is GoInG oN it’S mY DreAM SeEd gUys
@keilah-h I did discover that seed a while ago but I had no idea I had told anyone on KP I’ve been building a library on it since my survival server went dead
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@keilah-h cool! Did you have a review, or do you just want me to use some of what you said here on KP? And I’ll just use your first name if you want or I can add your full name and add what books you’ve published like I’m going to do for Ellette, up to you. Just let me know what your book(s) titles and your full name is if you wanted to do…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @esther-c @anyone-else-idk
I’m still taking a break from KP, but I had to pop on here to ask y’all if you would be okay with me using your Amazon/Goodreads review(s) for an Instagram post to show what readers are saying about Freedom’s Fire to help me with some marketing.
You can stay anonymous or I can…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Thank you ladies so much!!! This info is super helpful and I’m sure I would have had to dig through too many articles to get it otherwise. 😖😂 I appreciate your help!! 😊
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
maybe he could just dip one claw in the ink and use that to write? Or he could tap out Morse code lol
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay. Grabbing the names of different species from different sources of inspiration is a good idea since they probably all have different cultures and it would be a little weird and boring. Nice!
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Koshka replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Yep reptiles. (My younger self meant gentiles.)
Is he allergic to corn or something? Our dog was lactose intolerant as a puppy, but he can handle smaller doses of dairy now.
Oh gracious. The baton one is probably my favorite. XD
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
also vandegrit isn’t a bad name for a creature, even if you do end up changing it. How do you come up with these names?
Sure, I’ll share with you my fantasy name tips. I’ve come up with a few over the years.
For Kentor things, I take a word that somehow represents the character or item and translate it into Latin. But Latin is boring b…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Please tell me you kept Stripe’s glasses (or at least have another bespectacled Kunulf in the story somewhere, if you didn’t) cause I love the look of it.
He was wearing these in Chapter the 18th. He only wears them for reading.
does that imply that a “vunny” exists? some animal, maybe?
Yes. This is a creature something like a rabbit.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ah, tragic! *sniff* Otterpops were a precious part of my childhood.
Further, I thought “Alexander the Grape” the height of wit when I was little. Your sister may have been onto something.
They’re delicious on a hot day! 🙂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
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