Keilah H.

@hybridlore
@keilah-h

okay!! Thanks for the suggestions!! I’ll rework a few scenes.

@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint

So, keilah likes the scene that you have a problem with, linus! This is great. 🤣

Here’s an idea. What if I shift it a little so that the conversation happened a day or two after they had already been on the ship? Do you think that would work?

@keilah-h

Yay, can’t wait!!

@raxforge

Oh cool! Have you ever played a game? How does designing a character work? (If you’ve done that)

@keilah-h

Well, that’s more experience than me. XD

@theducktator

Oh, and did that pudding ever thicken?

NOOO it DIDN’T

The flavor is still good, though. :p

@hybridlore @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin

Here’s another scene! This is one I started in a previous draft and finished just recently. Again no critiques please! Not ready for that lol

November’s foot tapped against the marble flooring. His lips quirked to the side and he cleared his throat, glancing f…

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@keilah-h

(replying two days late… ugh)

currently debating whether I should do some of my other ones today.

Did you end up doing them?

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

Oof, it’s been two weeks. Well, here’s the third chapter, please tell me what you think once you’re done reading it. This is a shorter chapter, so I’ll probably post the fourth tomorrow.

Chapter 3

“That’s lovely.” Elina sat down, an uncom…[Read more]

@keilah-h

So you like it? You think i should keep it?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION

Leon woke in the darkness. He heard Rolf breathing and felt the rocking of the ship below him. He sat up, wondering where they were going and what fate lay ahead. Leon leaned against the side of the ship’s hold and drew his knees to his chest,…

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@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

For all those it may concern…. I would call this the theme song if this book.

@raxforge @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h @whalekeeper @theducktator

It feels like forever since I posted a story on here, but here is story #11! This is my favorite one of the entire Baron Chronicles, and it brought tears to my eyes. I hope you enjoy it too:)

 
Though your sins be as Scarlet…
Sunlight filtered through the pale…[Read more]

@keilah-h

😂 I think he’ll think it’s funny. And he might even be pleased that something picked a name like his for a book character…even if they’re a bad guy…

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

For anyone who is interested…..

Hassan (center) and two of the other slave traders.

(and yes, they are in their native country in this picture)

@theducktator

Don’t worry, I added it!!

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks so much girl!!

@theshadow

Thank you! I really appreciate it!!

@youthreegirls @keilah-h @grcr @smiley

Sorry for dropping off the face of the earth there for a little bit! I was still editing I just forgot to post, lol! So here’s a chapter dump for y’all!! (I apologize if I’…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Hmm. I guess we’ll have to see.

@hybridlore

Fine then!!

*pulls out dagger, grabs Alec, and holds blade to his throat.* BACK OFF!!

yeah, we’ll have to see what happens.

@keilah-h

I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious.

Yes…. but the only time they were seen was in Clonabay, and i mentioned the amount of different cultures that are all mixed in there. No one is really noticing anything in that city. Ya know? Plus, Leon and Rolf are in such a bad state that the people of the Empire…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Hmm. So what might be confusing?

You want to try and bounce your thoughts off of me?

@keilah-h

You read the very newest section from today?

@linus-smallprint    @Liberty    @Hybridlore     @Koshka    @elishavet-pidyon    @Keilah-h

NEXT SECTION!!!

(If I was Freedom I’d be posting trigger warnings. But y’all have been amply warned.)

Leon woke the next morning to find one of the men cutting the ropes that bound his wrists. One arm came free, and Leon gasped from the pain that…

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@keilah-h

Lolololol.