Keilah H.

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Chapter 26 out!

I feel like the quality of these recent chapters hasn’t been as good, and I’m loosing steam. But I need to remeber that this is just the first draft. Fell free to provide… motivation to get me to keep going until then end. (Interoperate that how you will. I know,…[Read more]

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It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.

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So that is actually a term used in the medieval days. It means, “no one has explored this far, these waters are uncharted, it’s dangerous, travel at your own risk.” They would write, “here be dragons” because uncharted water is as dangerous as sailing into a place you know dragons live.

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So as you can see, the Empire has outposts along all boarders. So crossing boarders is not much of an option.

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I didn’t post a map on this book. Just the first one. I can post that again.

they are in the caves right now, but they are drawing up plans to build a village up there.

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they’ll be up in the mountains. If you looked on the map (which will be in the front of the book) you would see that the Empire controls these mountain ranges and the harbors beyond.

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NEXT SECTION!

“They’re back!” yelled a child’s voice.

Leon scrambled to his feet and ran for the entrance to the cave. Roland, Liesl and several others followed. They stepped out into the evening light just in time to see the hunt…

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Yeah, true.

At least it was cold enough that it killed him pretty quick.

Ugh. I sound so heartless and not at all like I was tearing up AGAIN when I edited that scene, even though I’ve been over it more times then I can count.

Anyways.

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Honestly, I think it’s more “poor Rolf”

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Chapter 25 out!

I don’t think I want this to be James. This is too similar to Eric. Both characters feel unappreciated, and grow depressed because they don’t fit in and feel. The only thing different is James has hope in The Saviour so he’s less self centered and is more outgoing.…[Read more]

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New chapters!

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NEXT SECTION!

“We need more meat,” Rolf said. He and several others were sitting about in the main cavern, eating breakfast.

“Are we running low again?” Julian asked.

“Yes, and we’ve hunted this area clean.”

“Then let’s pla…

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Yes, that would be sad.

I guess we’ll never know.

I like the cave stuff too! It’s a fun change.

yes, I love simple weddings.

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😂 Right. Writers are odd in certain things.

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Really?! Why? I noticed some YWWs doing that…and I wondered, “Why?”

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He’s the spiritual one, the one that’s always reminding the other characters to trust God or to appreciate their surroundings. He loves animals and plants and being out in nature. He’s also athletic.

Spot on!

(and don’t worry, calling adult or near adult male characters “boy” is a common thing among writers)

Have you ever seen people…[Read more]

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Thank you! 🙂

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Not sure, but I’m glad you do!! I love all the names together.

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Thanks!!!