@keilah-h
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GodlyFantasy12 posted an update 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @loopylin @theloonyone @thearcaneaxiom @anyone-else
Heyooo!! So Ik I haven’t been on much recently and want to explain and also give a small heads up.Don’t worry! I’m not leaving KP! *sigh of relief XD* but I may not be on as much…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h imo anti-heroes are also morally ambiguous/morally grey characters or characters who aren’t technically villains but more on the Antagonistic scale, in the way that they get in the way of the Hero accomplishing the goal, but they aren’t outright bad characters or have bad/wicked goals.
(yes a lot of villains or morally grey but ther…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @light-warrior-pen
Whenever we start, I’m gonna let one of y’all start us off, because my villain writing… Idk how to describe it other than, “meh.” 😅🤣🤣
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Esther started the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @joy-calle @acancello @felicity @kyronthearcanin @anyone-I-missed
Ok, ok, ok…
I have an idea.
So, I know we already have multiple RPs, but what if we did another character castle…
This time we don’t add in any good…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h
XD Yes I’ve been wanting to put him in and I thought this could be a fun opportunity to do it 😅 Poor Allen and Serin are gonna be surprised…
But I’m excited!
I won’t be able to RP for a while but I’ll try for sometime in the next couple of days!
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Enid replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I figured. Just frustrates me sometimes. I know I’m going down a rabbit trail, but my brain’s been like that lately XD
Btw, Seb will totally step out again, he needs a sec to process 😛 Howzer and the girl can talk to someone else or try to prompt him out – your choice!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @whoever-else
Here’s the next bit of the Dragonsbane Society:
Kirah sat at a long wooden table, in between Cora and Leif. Amara sat across from her, as did Banner, Rollan, and Elryn. She hadn’t yet touched the food in front of her. The visions had stolen her appetite away, and t…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yes, Sunny is definitely great! I think the reason I liked Tsunami is because I was really shy, and Tsunami was just the opposite XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
That sounds really great! I enjoyed the Jade Mountain Academy thing for the most part, but that’s just cause it had Moon and Qibli in it, who are my absolute favorites. My first favorite was Tsunami, though, especially after book 2.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
That’s really good! (When I wrote that prophecy, I was under the impression that prophecies were supposed to rhyme for some reason… I don’t know where I got that)
Anyway, yeah, Wings of Fire and its prophecies are awesome! I’ve been kind of disappointed by the series recently, though the storyline is really good.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I’ve written a couple different stories about Amara before, and it always starts with her eyes becoming slitted. Then afterwards she’d have scales on her arms, then sometimes in her mouth (because of eventual fire-breathing), and by the end of it she’d have wings and stuff.
I’d appreciate the help with the prophecy! I’ve only…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yep, pretty similar to that! As for the dragon traits, (from what I’m thinking so far) it starts out small, until eventually she’s more dragon than she is human. It revolves a lot around the prophecy (which I have yet to write 😅🤣), and I’m still debating as to whether to have them turn back to normal after the events of the book… I…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
No, I can totally tell you! Just a warning, it is somewhat of a spoiler, but not hugely. Basically, it means one of her parents was a dragon, and eventually her own dragon traits start to show. (So, BIGGER SPOILER,
Amara’s father was a dragon.) I’ll get into how that happened later, because it’s somewhat complicated. -
PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
So I think I’m going to go ahead and throw in Kun’en if that’s okay with everyone?
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Enid replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Coolio, I’ll write his POV in a minute
Do be aware, he’s not… the nicest kid. He’s not going to like any character right off the bat, unless they look like a strong role model/royalcore/hilarious troublemaker. So keep that in mind. He’s very pessimistic.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @janellebelovedpig @keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings @acancello @all those I’ve forgotten lol
Here’s Brycen’s first POV for Chapter 3:
Brycen ducked under a tent flap, moving swiftly and silently. A black cloak followed behind him, the hood up to hide his face. In his hand was a necklace- expensive, with some kind of…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
It’s definitely leaning more towards horror; like ‘The Case of the Bloody Footprints,’ ‘The Case of the Man-Eating Rats,’ ‘The Case of the Skull in the Jar,’ that sort of thing. Those aren’t the actual names of the cases, but you get the idea.
It’s not… too graphic? A lot of the violence is hearsay, since it’s ghosts they’re dealing…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Alright! I’m just gonna keep the chapters on here instead of making a different forum, so ignore the name. 🤣
Tags: @janellebelovedpig @felicity @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else
Definitely let me know if Nia went way off the rails… I’m not the greatest at… I don’t know what to call it. Villian writing? She’s not exactly a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks!!! How to Train Your Dragon is awesome, and your story sounds really cool. 🙂 I’ll tag you when I get the next chapter up!
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Felicity replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I think this is the last thing you posted about Howzer:
Howzer
The human was trying to touch him.
No!
He crouched still lower and backed away a step or two, hissing. He couldn’t speak their language, nor they his, but he’d found that a well-placed snarl worked fine to get his point across sometimes.
“Don’t touch me.” he growled.…[Read more]
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@godlyfantasy12 I’m so glad you’re not leaving!! You are always so sweet and funny, and brighten my day with your kind words.
Oh, of course sister!! We would never kick you out!! XD And yes, that sounds good! We’ve already paused the 2.0 castle since Freedom left, and I haven’t really had time to RP lately anyway, so it’s all good! 😀
Oh…[Read more]
@goldlyfantasy12
CONGRAGULATIONS!!! That is awesome!! Best of luck to you!! I’m sure you will do great with your awesome and peppy spirit (:
And yeah we totally get it! I haven’t been on as much, life is just life and does require our attention XD
Well all the loves and posiive vibes to you!!
*is very glad you’re not leaving*
Congratulations! May the Lord be with you, and give you strength to do His will! ❤️
I’ll be praying for you and I hope it goes well. ❤️❤️❤️
Aw, thanks! You’re awesome too and I hope you know that.
Ok…*deep breath* i’m so glad you’re not leaving! You’re in my prayers, girl!!!
All right! That’s a cool job, and I hope you have fun! It’s also totally fine with me if you aren’t on as much as you used to be.
That’s awesome! No worries about the RP’s, it’s amazing that your able to take more time to serve our Lord!