Keilah H.

@whalekeeper

AWWW Thank you 😊. That’s awesome! I’m glad she likes him, I might end up writing his story after I do some more with Baron.

@rae

thank you!

About your sketch heres some thing you could try to change:

The first thing I noticed is the ear and it’s connection to the jaw. The anatomy of the ear doesn’t look right and it’s a bit small. The line that goes through the center of the eyes should reach back to the top of the ear. If you look up a side profile reference…[Read more]

I need criticism on this sketch. Especially the hair

@mineralizedwritings @linus-smallprint

OH MY GOODNESS!!!!! It looks awesome!!!!! I love it!!!!

@whalekeeper

Gabriel

Gabriel nodded, though he would prefer she slept more. “I assume we should continue then.” Gabriel stooped down and picked up a loose piece of twine he had missed on the floor from his earlier escapade. “I think I collected all your little things when you fell…Are you sure you don’t want to rest more? We aren’t going to…[Read more]

@rae

ah, now it’s all coming back to me. Yeah, give him a will to live and the original ending fits really well. Otherwise it’s juts a little flat, which is why I remembered it the way I expected it to go when I read it the first time. No yeah, It’s coming back now.

@ellette-giselle

XD But actually, in my memory (until you just recapped it) he was going to turn himself in and then they were attacked and he was killed protecting Jenna (?) and her family. I like that ending because Baron gave his life for someone instead of taking life…. but then that is also cliche for a redemption story (and cliche is not a…

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@whalekeeper

Gabriel Mai

“I…don’t hear a man’s voice. At least, I don’t think so. It’d have to be a strange one.” He shook his head. “It doesn’t matter. Try to sleep again if you can.”

@rae

That’s what we’re here for!

I’m sorry, that sounds rough. I’ll keep praying for you ❤️ Ellette’s idea is a good one, but I don’t know if it’ll work for sure. Maybe you could have a reminder on your phone or something that tells you to eat a snack? Just getting into the routine of eating three meals a day even if you’re not hungry  could h…

@keilah-h

In a book like this one it would be up at the top for me. It makes the end fall flat. *shrug*

@rae

hey, dump away.

Well that’s good! (forgive me if you already mentioned it and I forgot, but do they know yet what the condition is that is being treated, or is this more of testing out theories?)

Well, friends of mine who have eating problems I always take them on a run or something or to go do some hard work. Nothing like exercise…[Read more]

@rae

Honestly, I don’t remember my initial reaction, you would have to look back at the comments. XD But actually, in my memory (until you just recapped it) he was going to turn himself in and then they were attacked and he was killed protecting Jenna (?) and her family. I like that ending because Baron gave his life for someone instead of taking…[Read more]

A few things:

1. I have not collapsed or needed to go to the ER, and my doctor said that she’s happy to see I’m apparently improving faster than normal which she hoped. Still feels like forever, but recovery usually takes 2-4 years, so I guess I’m doing okay.

2. While that’s not a problem, my eating habits are. I don’t usually eat much, I don’t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Gabriel

“Him?” The voices in Gabriel’s head sounded like many, their voices shrill like a withered banshee spirits, groping at his mind. “Are you hearing voices as well?” He hoped she wasn’t. He hated the voices. Every moment he felt himself wanting more and more to shout at them, even though he knew it would be in vain. He wanted…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Jealous. I’m in an art slump. Not happy with anything I draw, which might mean I’m on the cusp of a breakthrough…? But not counting on it.

Oof, yeah. I get that. I had that for a literal year once, then I started drawing again, and now I’ve been off and on. I’ll draw fervently for like a week or two usually, then hit art block for a…[Read more]

@keilah-h

They’ve had good a mock trial and some awesome debate issues in the past (like arguing the death penalty, but you can’t bring in the Bible, only from a logos, ethos, and pathos standpoint)

Sounds good!

@whalekeeper

How is your work going? I think I had the same debate topic once, not sure. I’m sorry it’s not a pleasant task for you…

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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator @hybridlore Idk

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you! 😃

It’s a paper sketch with pencil, which I scanned into Ibis paint (my new fav!) isolated the pencil lines and darkened them (It even has a tool for this it’s the best) and then used digital brushes for the rest. The watercolor bleed brush is amazing it almost looks real!

@grcr

Thank you!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

Yay I got glaze working and it didn’t effect the output too much. It did take over two hours to process though lol

@loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone else

Anyways heres Flax