Keilah H.

@ellette-giselle

lol, I think I’m going to keep him on the main floor to try creep out as many people as possible 😁

@raxforge

In the basement sorting nails and bolts with Leo.

….. I don’t know. *shrug*

@ellette-giselle

…Where is Rory?

@whalekeeper

@ellette-giselle

@keilah-h

I as well never read the HTTYD books, but I do love the movies! And tangled is better than the original tale.

@whalekeeper

Coraline

*COUGH COUGH* WHAT?! The book is way better! The movie is good, but I prefer the book!

@raxforge

Oh. My. Goodness.

Keep that creep away from my Rory or I swear the kid’s gonna die of fright! 😂😂😂

He’s traumatized enough already.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

The day passed, and the five young men explored the town. Everyone seemed to be very busy, and no one was interested in talking with them. So, the five decided to scout out the town and see what it was like. As Roland had said, the town wa…

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New charrie!!!

Mateo

Tall and cover in black, the figure wore a black sombrero type hat and ominously played a white guitar. His melody could send chills up the bravest of heart. He hung his head low, making it so that no one could see his face. He walked into the school grounds, the essence of evil hanging around him.

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@koshka @loopylin

Rax and Ben

Rax didn’t like Syph’s answer and wanted to make amends, “I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”

@ellette-giselle I know, Rax is weird

@whalekeeper

lol.

I was told the writing style wasn’t great either.

Have you read the original Rapunzel? Like, the 100 page narrative? Old, old, old.

@liberty

Just emailed you about this!!!!!
IT”S SO GOOD!

@keilah-h

WOW!!!! I LOVE IT!
What program did you use?!?!?!

@the_lost-journal  @keilah-h   @theducktator

@whalekeeper

Never read the HTYD books because someone told me not to and just stick with the movies.

Never read Princess Bride but I really want to!

There are two movies that were better than the book that I can think of off the top of my head……. but I forgot the second. XD

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@whalekeeper

Wait… you posted in the spring channel here, I think. Are you joining KDWC?

Lolol! Yeah, senior year is kind of crazy.

Normally everyone’s trying to kill each other with jokes.

🤣🤪

Oh wow. I’ve never really thought about that before, but it must be really weird and interesting. What’s the coolest thing you’ve learned so far?

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@ellette-giselle

Great! Yeah, I thought it was a really cool way to detail the narrative and make Sara’s voice distinct. I’m glad it doesn’t feel too distracting. Now to be more consistent with it 🤔😂

@hybridlore

First off,  @whalekeeper had an amazing suggestion for Cole and Sara! Love that!

Second, I like the synesthesia. It’s interesting and I don’t really know much about it so I feel like i’m uncovering something new as I read. I may be the odd number on this, but I personally enjoy it.

how about you, @linus-smallprint ?

@whalekeeper

You’re good! XD

Oh, this is unrelated, but by the way, how is Challenge 4 going? What are you planning to do for your senior thesis? (I saw you were sprinting to work on it.)

I think I understand what you were trying to say, and I love that idea! A scene is starting to form in my head already 😅 The only problem is, I’ll have to…[Read more]

@keilah-h

interesting, I’ll check it out! And yeah, the original jurassic park was a billion times darker! they killed a baby and a ton of different children in that one! in the movie, no kids die! plus the characters have morals! (in the book they are a bunch of self centered jerks who would probably push a child towards a raptor to…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I’d say The Princess Bride was a tie.

@keilah-h

Jurassic Park is a book?

@whalekeeper

Awesome!! Sorry I stopped tagging you, I didn’t know if you were still reading.

Thank you so much for the feedback! Making the world relatable was one of my big focuses, because I didn’t want it to just be this unrealistic cliche dystopian. I wanted the reader to be able to see why the government was this way, and for the gra…[Read more]