Keilah H.

@hybridlore

Okay, nice!

Yes, lolol. He did apologize. For real this time.

How about Michael? Thoughts on what he said?

@ellette-giselle

He’s slowly softening to the rebels, and becoming curious about their strength and hope. Also, he apologized.

@hybridlore

Yes, but not anyone that we know. yet

Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that,

So what are you meaning by this? (not that your’re wrong, just interested to see how these sections are coming across to the reader.)

@ellette-giselle

Hey, I was right.

Good chapters. Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that, and the ending of the last chapter.

@keilah-h

well, one thing, it made me decide I NEVER would want to ever play minecraft. That game would bore me out of my mind. XD

@highscribeofaetherium

Well, first off, I was really annoyed by the time I got to it. Just the whole minecraft stuff was driving me out of my mind. I felt like with that one he was relying more on the novelty of having his stick figures in a video game then his actual story.

I liked Purple and The King’s story, and I knew at once that the boy…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

yes….

@linus-smallprint

@highscribeofaetherium

@keilah-h

So not to take this over again, but I watched the animation vs. Minecraft

So…. why was I supposed to cry?

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Just did the math, and the entire Baron Chronicles (at 1,500 edited words per half hour) would take me 11.7 hours!

Which means I may or may not go over 12 hours tomorrow cuz, for one, I know it’ll probably take me a little longer and two, I have another short story that I’ve had on my mind related to the Baron Chronicles but will not be published…[Read more]

Hey!

So last year I wrote for 12 hours on July 1st, and I kinda want to do it again if I can. It turns out perfect cuz it’s actually supposed to rain where I am tomorrow so I have an excuse to stay indoors.

I am going to add editing and writing this time cuz The Baron Chronicles needs some more editing love (haven’t done much since…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I’ve been on KP like a year and a half by now, and I have never seen anyone be that way to another writer here. Most the time, I actually feel like people don’t criticize my writing enough on here.  So yeah, maybe people are like that other places, but I’ve never seen it here. Maybe some jokes, but never anything serious.

@the_lost-journal

WHY IS IT SO RELATABLE!!!!!!

I feel like that last one is definitely how people come up to me after reading some of my stuff…..

@keilah-h

Sounds good.

@hybridlore

Eh…. it was a wild week. One I’m glad to have over. 😅

Thanks, glad you like them! Yes, Amber did do a good job with him, but she’s a peacemaker type.

You think I’m gonna kill someone! *is offended* XD

@hybridlore

I feel like this is the part where you might kill someone off

Same. 🙁

@ellette-giselle

All good things, hopefully?

I liked these two chapters. Amber handled Jonathan very well, and I’m excited to see him have the conversation with Michael. I also want to know how their mission goes.

Why do I feel like this is the part where you might kill someone off?

@theshadow

Hey! I’m doing pretty good, how are you?

No worries, I know the end of the school year is chaotic. 😂 I’ll add you to the new doc!

Thanks! Glad you like him. 😅 He’s one of my favorites too.

@theshadow

I’ll try to get to it!

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Sorry I’m a bit late today! I had a lot going on.

@rae

Gotcha.