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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Aw good!! It was believable then?
You may have to email me for that other question. Not exactly sure what you’re asking.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
So does everyone else at the base know… you know.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I love Michael. His explanation was believable and so sweet. 😢
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 24
Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.
How can anything go b…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.
Thank you so much!!
A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(47)
Only 1. I ran out of time to get the other done and I haven’t found a solid chunk of time to sit down. Barely got this one done.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
New chapters should be out today, but I noticed no one but Hybridlore has read the ones I posted yesterday, (45-46)
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
Praying!
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
I got to eat a beef hot dog today 🎉
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Nice to see you back! (Ha, I know I’ve already talked to you, but still. ;))
I’m not sure I’ll be able to commit to another full project right now, but I might pop in occasionally. So glad you were able to figure out some more stuff this time around, though!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I think you’re on Chapter 40.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Sure thing!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
lol, yes!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year ago
Here’s the last story as it is now. I made a few changes during CEW, but I don’t think I made many
A breeze swept over the countryside, traveling over the hills and through the meadows, before stopping to tangle a young woman’s hair at the command of the man who sat in the grass beside her.
“Baron! Why?” She whined, trying to st…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sits back and smiles*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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