Keilah H.

@ellette-giselle wowwwww! I don’t know what to say. Will he die? will he live?? I must know!!!

also, a good idea would probably be to separate the writing in his letters out with an indent or with centered text as opposed to the normal look:

After some time, Aaron took up the quill and began to write, unsteadily at first, but growing…

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@smiley that was funny, who are the non-marvel characters again?

all that to say, I really don’t like the damsel in distress trope cause it implies that being “in distress” is all the character’s good for.

@ellette-giselle ok but HOW is a damsel in distress cool??

The whole “in distress” thing, from what I’ve seen, has kinda been turned into “I am a pansy and will faint or something at the very sight of blood or even a grasshopper.”

I really don’t think every female character should be the “rarrrr I’m a warrior and you can’t say no to that” kind…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle haha Rory’s in for a surprise if he thinks Hunter and the gang aren’t soldiers.

@calyhuge I think I said Hunter was 12 earlier, but apparently I made a mistake and he’s actually 13. Sorry everyone else! lol

@koshka @loopylin

Hunter

“Well, he startled me and I almost killed him at lunch the other day, and then we were in th…[Read more]

@theducktator I think it’d be either, depending on what He wanted to do with the river haha

@elishavet-pidyon thanks lol

and yeah, I was honestly surprised by how fast I got through the books. I thought they were longer. It’s been a little while since I’ve read them.

They’re still as awesome as the first time I read them though.

@ellette-giselle

I don’t know why a centaur. I think I just wanted to see if I could draw a fairly…[Read more]

@everyone

I was bored and was re-reading Narnia so….

here’s Crosshair as a centaur.

@ellette-giselle @calyhuge @koshka @loopylin

Hunter

“Hey, do you know Crosshair?” Some older kids came up to Hunter, questioning.

Hunter nodded. “Sure do! He’s my brother. Where do you know him from?”

@freed_and_redeemed oooooh getting interesting!

maybe I should make fan art of this.

@elishavet-pidyon oooh yes gray eyes, my favorite haha

@ellette-giselle that’s good. I haven’t been on horses much but I’ve never been thrown by one either, thankfully.

@ellette-giselle CHECK IT OUUUUUUT

Man that is amazing, did you use a reference or was it from memory?

@highscribeofaetherium 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃

@highscribeofaetherium whoa, really nice!

@elishavet-pidyon Is he based off the book description? Looks great!

@rae oh that’s cool, even if you do decide to change it.

@ellette-giselle haha that’s horses for ya, isn’t it?

@theducktator bruhhhhh

@theducktator

take my advice.

Don’t.

It’s a hundred times worse than you think.

I looked it up cause I was like “Okay, what is it about this story that everyone hates on? Surely it can’t be as bad as my halfbaked writing?”

I was wrong.

It was infinitely worse.

My characters have been vindicated and I will never call their relationships cringey again.

hopefully you guys find this funny:

those are trashy ship names for Crosshair/Feather and Huntress/Sniper but whatever, they get the point across

@ellette-giselle you’re very welcome!