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@rochellaine oh yeah…………yeah no I still don’t know him. 77 Sunset Strip sounds a teensy bit familiar but I’ve never seen it. is it a good family movie?

@dekreel I’m glad @rochellaine included this link ’cause I don’t know the answer to your questions. I’m learning right along with you! 🙂

@josiebeth I love K. M. Weiland too! I’ve read her Outlining Your Novel, Structuring Your Novel, and Creating Character Arcs (and I use the workbooks). I haven’t actually read any of her fiction yet though.

If you like to read fantasy, Chuck Black and Robert Treskillard has some really good ones!

I always thought ukulele looked like a lot of…[Read more]

@kaya-young thanks! I really like short names and Rin seemed to fit her personality really well

@rochellaine nice collages! I tried really hard to recognize some of the faces. but, alas, I don’t think I know them. I almost thought Jared looked familiar…..

@sam-kowal Yeah I totally didn’t watch it either. was writing 🙂

But…..

I AM SO GLAD THE EAGLES WON! MORE IMPORTANTLY; THE PATRIOTS LOST! 😉 it was so cool that some of them on the team gave glory to God. (oh, yeah I realize @livgiordano just said that)

@joisebeth Welcome to the bestistest place in the world! (hmm, seems I’ve been beaten to saying it)

I like to write Christian contemporary and fantasy too. I also like historical fiction.

what are your favorite books/movies?

I like music too. I’m guessing by your profile pic you play an instrument? I play piano and guitar. I LOVE music by…[Read more]

@rochellaine I agree too. more conflict makes things more interesting *rubs hands together*

I’m in the USA too. 😊

@princessfoo Cool! *high fives*

@jane-maree yay, thank you! that means a lot coming from you 😊

@nicoleriver03 That looks great!👍

Here’s a character collage for my main character, Rin Adachi:

@gh24682468999 lol, sometimes it’s just best to keep things private. ah, us writers are so misunderstood. 😉

@sam-kowal Good revisions. (And good synopsis in general, btw. These things are hard.)

Possibly, these three revisions could help.

Feastings end – feasting ends.

Only humans farm in the city of Kurr. Dwarfs would rather win glory in the exosuit arena. When food got low in the winter of 1276, the dwarves robbed us of our crops.

The dwarfs are…[Read more]

@sam-kowal The idea is definitely intriguing.

As far as the synopsis goes, I agree with Kate that the voice is slightly inconsistent. My main advice though is cut anything you can. Like, “believe me, that tends to curb one’s appetite could be cut. There are a few words you cut elsewhere or phrases you could rephrase to sue less word.

Also, I…[Read more]

@dekreel Too true. And XD @michael-stanton ‘s

@jane-maree Ah, yes. Your screen must exceed the length of the image. I went ahead and tiled the parallax images.

 So here is two characters from a comic book I wrote… brother and sister. Dude is Ash(lighting) girl is Darya (water)

@ochellaine I’ll have to check out befunky.com. is it free to use?

@kate-flournoy

Possibly up your alley.

@devastate-lasting just lettin’ you know I started using the notebook.ai thing. it is awesome! thanks for letting us know