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@rochellaine I’m not writing right now but……….

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ROCHELLAINE!!!! *throws confetti* *gives you cake* *hands you party hat* I didn’t know today was your birthdaaaaaaaay! Are you doing anything special to celebrate? 😀 (though writing on your birthday is already pretty stellar 😉 )

@skredder Jane said that in my prologue of my WIP, I was telling instead of showing a lot. Well, I rewrote the prologue, but I’m afraid it’s kinda choppy. Would you mind reading it and telling my what you think (comparing it to the first prologue)?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YJqgpOoWQPlg8psr3N6IY-TeW7tZtrcKdxk8uw7TcGI/edit 

I’ll tag…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira I used to only write historical fiction. yeah, it’s a lot of fun to research for historical books. 🙂 What are your favorite books? I really like books by Douglas Bond (historical), Chuck Black (fantasy), C R Hedgecock (contemporary), Robert Treskillard (historical fantasy), and I’m sure there are more, but I won’t overwhelm you 😉

@ariel-ashira Welcome to Kingdom Pen! Trust me, you don’t have to be a great writer to be here; I’m not so good myself. We’re all learning and helping each other grow. Any and every writer is welcome! 😉

What genres do you like to write/read?

@filewriterbase13x Welcome! I’m homeschooled too and LOOOOOVE chocolate! 😉 I used to collect a lot of Legos, and I have a whole town set up on my bedroom dresser 😀

@that_writer_girl_99 sorry, but I have to got now. Have fun writing! 🙂

@warrenluther04 awesome!

okay, bye! 🙂

@that_writer_girl_99 I’m still on for a little bit more.

@warrenluther04 Welcome to writer’s corner! 😀 what are you working on?

@warrenluther04 thank you reading it! I’m glad you’re enjoying it 🙂

@skredder Awesome! 😀 (we’ll see what @seekjustice says too 🙂 )

@skredder okay, would it be possible to break it up into sections (just when you want to give it to readers)? and are you up for the three-way swapping? 😉

@dekreel @warrenluther04 @dragon-snapper @skredder @rochellaine I’m writing for a bit 🙂

@dekreel Wow, you were up pretty late 😛

@jane-maree no problem, thank you a bunch! <3

@rochellaine that’s totally fine. Thank you for reading my chapter. 🙂 I’ll keep you/your brother in mind in case I have gun questions 😉

@skredder yay, thank you! Yeah I’d love to read yours too! Are you still in the process of writing it or is it a complete first draft? Maybe, if @seekjustice wants…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira YES! ANOTHER ENFJ!! I love being an ENFJ. 😛

@daeus It was clearly because of your nose. XD 😛

@ariel-ashira lol I’m really only a king because @dragon-snapper made me one. That and the fact that I obviously have a superlative nose. 😉 😛

@ariel-ashira Hey hey! That’s awesome. 😀

@warrenluther04 I am lovin’ all the kapeefer literature you and Dekreel are writing! 😀 Great job! 😉

@seekjustice Yay, chapter swapping! Sounds great, thank you! 😀

Yes, that makes sense. I think I’m going to rewrite the first chapter, keeping everyone’s notes in mind. Jane said I was telling instead of showing a lot, so I’m going to try to work on that (maybe I should finish Daeus’ Show Don’t Tell course, hehe 🙂 ). So I’ll definitely let you…[Read more]

@dekreel this is totally awesome-sauce! I can’t wait until the next paaaaaaart! 😀

@warrenluther04 @jane-maree @rochellaine @skredder @seekjustice @anyone I forgot

Thank you all so very much for reading the first chapter of my WIP! I admit, I was really nervous about other people reading it, but you all were so honest and I will keep all of your advice in mind.

Considering how much I needed to work on with my first chapter, I…[Read more]

@warrenluther04 yeah, I’d love it if you would! 🙂 warning though; this is a really rough first draft