Kayla Joy

I like it a lot! It looks more professional now, I think.

That is beautiful! Great job, Amanda. That was really creative.

@Sarah Hoven, my were’s are in the story granted their powers by God in order to fight demons and other evils that manage to invade the real world.

@Little Brown Dog – Spiritual warfare is not fantasy. It’s real. If you are going to write about spiritual warfare, God’s power, demons, etc., you need to do it the right way. The God that we serve d…[Read more]

@Sarah Hoven, my were’s are in the story granted their powers by God in order to fight demons and other evils that manage to invade the real world.

@Little Brown Dog – Spiritual warfare is not fantasy. It’s real. If you are going to write about spiritual warfare, God’s power, demons, etc., you need to do it the right way. The God that we serve d…[Read more]

@Little Brown Dog – I am concerned about the content of this scene. Does this bring glory to God? Will it draw your readers to Him? In reality, supernatural power can only come from two sources: God, and Satan. Any person or creature that derives supernatural power from a source other than God is evil. I believe it is dangerous to present, even…[Read more]

I’ve seen Valkyrie! It’s a great movie. I was very affected by it; especially at the end where Von Haeften steps in front of Stauffenberg at the firing squad.

Okay. Thank you.

Not for Kingdom Pen. My brother and I are creating a website about creation and evolution, and we’re kind of stuck on how to structure/ write the pages, articles, etc.

Thanks, Hope! Yes, I was specifically asking about that part, but if you see any other problems, please tell me. This is my first story, and I am sure it has many flaws. 🙂

Thanks, Daeus! I have one more question. Is there a way I can design my own logo all by myself? Do I need a special program to do it?

@Kate,
“Also you might consider designing yourself a logo (maybe just a cute little curly quill pen) that goes with the title.”
How do you design a logo? My brother and I are creating a website, and we want to have our own emblem.

Daeus, – Daniel#2. No, a mirror can be used to reflect tiny semiconductor lasers in cd and DVD readers, but high energy high frequency lasers would destroy any materials that come in their path with radiation. Low frequency infrared lasers would just melt through it.

Hope, actually, a very strong very dense shield could absorb a few shots from…[Read more]

Hi Hope, it’s me, Daniel#2. The effect of such a weapon would be much like a stab from a white hot sword, ouch! As for appearance, that’s all relative to frequency. Depending on what materials are used, a laser beam can have a wide range of color and destructive properties. With a frequency of 3 terahertz or so, the laser beam would be invisible…[Read more]

That is excellent, Daeus! Did you mean to put a question mark after “How did the spies escape”? That is the only problem I can see.

Rolena, Daniel#2. On transportation. How about charging the metal body of their car with a couple million volts when necessary? It’s quite simple, all you need is a well placed Tesla coil under the back seat with the car’s body as a secondary capacitor! That would give anyone standing on the ground a mighty shock were they to touch the car when it…[Read more]