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@godlyfantasy12

I love the character collages!!! They’re all wonderful. I think Corvina’s might be my fav… (I love an interesting villain😉)

@emilysf

Ooo… Love it! (Funny, but I actually had to read Thoreau for school this year, so I get that quote.😂)

@elishavet-pidyon

That quote… I love it!!! XD Is it original?

@emilysf

I agree with you! It takes a lot for a scene to impress me, and that scene did. Nicely done! 😉

Nice to meet you, Clare! Can’t wait to get to know you better. 🙂 <333

Here’s a scene I’m fairly happy with. It needs rewritten, but it’s a good start. 🙂 It’s the first scene in my fantasy WIP in which the villain makes an appearance.

The girl was riding it now. The boy had let her have a turn. Her laughter lilted down through the sky to where he crouched in the shadow of the trees. He didn’t dare move. He could not…

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@godlyfantasy12

Thanks for tagging me! This will be fun. 😀

I LOVED your scene!!!! Poor November… *stifled sob* Makes me curious to know what’s up with this journal.😉

@emilysf

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Wow.

Just… wow…

That was PHENOMENAL! BRAVO!!!

As a side note, I don’t believe I’ve met you yet. Welcome to the KP forum! I’m Lydia. 🙂

@denali-christianson

Hi! I don’t believe I’ve met you yet. So nice to see you! I’m Lydia. 🙂 Welcome to the KP forum!

@unsung

*sidles into chat, grinning sheepishly* Well, I’m a bit late to the party… But welcome to the KP forum, Unsung! So good to have you here. 🙂 I’m Lydia.

Another Tolkien fan, woohoo!!! Tolkien is probably the author I admire the most; I’m a big fan! (To be perfectly honest, tho, you’re not the only one who’s never read LOTR.😉My mom read it…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

OoooOoOoOoOooo… Yeah, I’ve been there… Trying to make the choice of whether or not to let a beloved character go (whether by death or by joining the “bad guys”) is SO HARD.

I guess, for me, it came down to reality, predictability, and cliche-ness (pretty sure that’s not a word, but, oh well!😂). The character I had this proble…[Read more]

@unsung You’re welcome!!!

Aww THANK YOU!!!! I love yours as well!!!

Hello @unsung welcome to the Kingdom!!!! *waves* We’re SO thrilled to have you here!!! I’m Issabelle, but feel free to call me Is or Issa or any other nickname you come up with – it’s much quicker to spell, lol. And fantasy is one of the best genres ever!! *high fives*

@maryg3 Hey, Mary!! From what I’ve gathered about the bit you shared, it seems your book’s overarching main focal theme is about finding your place in life. (Did I get it right? 😂) So for my personal opinion, I think it’s really great to have more than one message in a story!!! I mean, we as people are so complex and learn so many different…[Read more]

@power Whoa, that poem was AMAZING and really touching!! I loved it! THANK YOU for sharing it with us!! It reminded me of the lyrics from TobyMac’s song Scars. “It doesn’t matter who you are, this world goin’ leave some battle scars.”

@godlyfantasy12

This might not be the best advice by a long shot, but you seem like you’re REALLY in love with the idea of bringing them back. Like I can just feel how much you love this idea and your excitement to write it. And I guess for me, that’s the best reason to follow through with the idea! It’s your story at the end of the day, and if…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

AAAAH IT’S SO AWESOME TO SEE YOU HERE DENALI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *waves*  AND YES I HAVE FINALLY FOUND ANOTHER WHO SHARES MY OBSESSIVE LOVE OF MEDIEAVAL WEAPONRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *high fives*

@denali-christianson Not me making like all my characters Asian because I’m Asian heh….

Okay I had this convo with someone else a few months ago so let me just copy/paste it here…

for me, i honestly don’t like it when diversity is forced in a book. if you feel like your character should be white, then make them white, if not, then make them…

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@denali-christianson Pfft sorry probably shoulda tagged you earlier

@denali-christianson I still have all your text in my email from the post lol do you want it

@denali-christianson (hit send too soon to see newest post)

and now I have gathered another fan hehehehe it’s all coming together——

@denali-christianson I’m glad I’m a relatable person! 😀 Sometimes I think I’m just in the corner doing wack and setting things on fire while all the other writers have their lives together.