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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
also… I love how grammatically correct these boxes all bc all of why i’m typing it’s like going
“Ahem? Hello, but you are terrible at grammar.” Like yes. Ik. Thank you. XD I can write well if it’s in a book. Kinda. But just typing like this I write like texting.Stop personally attacking me Kingdom Pen xD
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yess my poor girl.
And yess. I do love Roger so much (especially in chapter 27 we show him being SUPER SWEERT and i’m dying of feelsss) our morally grey character that is the fan favorite, BUT Nathaniel aka NATE AKA CINNAMON ROLL BOI will always have a special place in my heart.
Oh yes. I got a message the other day of one of my…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 loll i’m not gonna say names, but it’s ok. I just think when I publish i’m going to send him a note and say “To the guy who said I could never publish: Thanks for the motivation. :)” bc yes, spite was a great inspirer to never give up.
But thank you!!
And actually I think awhile ago, like a lonnnggg while ago I sent in chapter 4…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
OH and our Villain >:) General Seznick

(This snippet of what will be done in a future chapter 0.O)
“Stop me?” My harsh laugh echoed through the warehouse, “Silly little girl, don’t you know? You won’t be fighting me. You’ll be fighting them.”Â
My smirk grew as the kids, the other soldiers, she knew and grew up with surrounded her with…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago

“I’ll find you, Grace.” I whispered through the tears.Â
Was it a pledge or a plea? A desperation to be enough or a doubt that I ever could? Would I find her just to loose her again?Â
No. I couldn’t. I won’t.
Two stone heads burned in the back of my mind, two names scrawled on top.Â
No. I couldn’t lose her too. I won’t be the only one le…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago

“Till death do us part.”Â
Sickness. Dearth too soon. Closing with another promise.Â
“I’ll keep her safe, I promise i’ll keep our baby safe.”Â
Intruders. Cornered by soldiers. Gunshot killing my sunshine.Â
“No, please not again.”Â
Pain. Crushed by guilt. Anger coursing through my veins.Â
“You’ll pay. You’ll pay for all that you’ve done.…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Also, (I’ll reply to all yall in just a sec) here’s the graphic/aesthetic of each of the MC’s and a lil kinda about them snippet.

Who was I? Was I anyone before? All I had were foggy memories of white walls and pain, and some sinister feeling that I was missing something. Did I have a family before being in this camp? Was I somebody? Or am I…[Read more]
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KattheWriter started the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
I gripped the bars of the cell so hard my knuckles turned white.
I thought he had changed.
I thought he cared.
He did it.
The thing I never thought he would do.
I felt like I was in a haze.
The noise of chains met my ears.
He said he understood.
He helped me.
How could he?
I staggered and gripped the bars harder.
He said he would…[Read more]
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KattheWriter posted an update 3 years, 8 months ago
I just finished Chapter 27 of my book! 😀
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Lol wait till you learn about Linear Algebra (though you probably won’t, that’s my cross to bear).
Aww, thank you for the prayers! Yeah, nah, my friends are like that to me as well, except even more harsh, though I know it’s cuz they care about me.
Yeah, can’t wait to talk to you more too!
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@felicity That sounds really good! I’d love to try it someday!
@lewilliams Eyyyyyyy there’s that familiar platypus profile picture! Good to see you too! Life is. Kind of a roller-coaster, I have a really busy semester ahead of me and I’m not sure how I’m going to balance writing with it, but we’ll see. How are you?
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Lin replied to the topic I'm doing CWW this year. Is anyone else doing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@felicity I’m reindeer, and my name there is same as here.
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@power Eyy love to see that you’re still here! One of the core tenets of the forum.
@booksandbeakers Oo that’d be exciting!
@folith-feolin Eyyy Lovecraft is definitely something else! He has beautiful prose!
@felicity Nice to meet you! What are some of the desserts you make?
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@sarafini Yes! Stories definitely get easier the more you do. Hey, novelettes and novellas are impressive! I’ve done very few of those.
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin I believe horror has supernatural elements whereas thriller is more of a crime thing, like the difference between a ghost and a killer. The premise of your story sounds a lot like Bendy and the Ink Machine, but I would totally read it!
Aye, I believe you can also finish a book one day!
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin Hey there! Another Lin! Yeah, Alice in Wonderland is definitely on the surreal side and is One of The Books Of All Time. Oo, you do horror too? I have some half-written short stories that try to be a bit on the horror side, but I feel like a lot of mine edge on thriller instead.
I do have several finished books, but nothing published…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Lol yeah it’s something similar to Alice in Wonderland or something like that, where nothing makes sense.
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Lin replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c Whoa, that’s really long! I really struggle with writing long works, lol. I always barely meet whatever word count I want them to be.
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Lin replied to the topic Biblical Fiction Ideas!! in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c I’m pretty sure it’s a word, lol. Yeah, the family drama was always really emotional for me.
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