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@warrenluther04 thank you reading it! I’m glad you’re enjoying it 🙂

@skredder Awesome! 😀 (we’ll see what @seekjustice says too 🙂 )

@skredder okay, would it be possible to break it up into sections (just when you want to give it to readers)? and are you up for the three-way swapping? 😉

@dekreel @warrenluther04 @dragon-snapper @skredder @rochellaine I’m writing for a bit 🙂

@dekreel Wow, you were up pretty late 😛

@jane-maree no problem, thank you a bunch! <3

@rochellaine that’s totally fine. Thank you for reading my chapter. 🙂 I’ll keep you/your brother in mind in case I have gun questions 😉

@skredder yay, thank you! Yeah I’d love to read yours too! Are you still in the process of writing it or is it a complete first draft? Maybe, if @seekjustice wants…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira YES! ANOTHER ENFJ!! I love being an ENFJ. 😛

@daeus It was clearly because of your nose. XD 😛

@warrenluther04 I am lovin’ all the kapeefer literature you and Dekreel are writing! 😀 Great job! 😉

@seekjustice Yay, chapter swapping! Sounds great, thank you! 😀

Yes, that makes sense. I think I’m going to rewrite the first chapter, keeping everyone’s notes in mind. Jane said I was telling instead of showing a lot, so I’m going to try to work on that (maybe I should finish Daeus’ Show Don’t Tell course, hehe 🙂 ). So I’ll definitely let you…[Read more]

@dekreel this is totally awesome-sauce! I can’t wait until the next paaaaaaart! 😀

@warrenluther04 @jane-maree @rochellaine @skredder @seekjustice @anyone I forgot

Thank you all so very much for reading the first chapter of my WIP! I admit, I was really nervous about other people reading it, but you all were so honest and I will keep all of your advice in mind.

Considering how much I needed to work on with my first chapter, I…[Read more]

@warrenluther04 yeah, I’d love it if you would! 🙂 warning though; this is a really rough first draft

@jane-maree probably general overall chapter, but also stuff like inconsistencies (which some readers have already pointed out), and yes showing/telling stuff. Thank you!!!

@jane-maree you’re welcome, ’twas my pleasure 😉

@seekjustice okay, i think i let you have access. lemme know if it didn’t work.

@rochellaine just looked at it! hilarious! *looks at outlining notes to make sure something like that doesn’t happen* 😉 😀

@rochellaine haha, okay sounds good 😀

@rochellaine ah, no I didn’t see that! was it recent? then i might be able to find it…..

@rochellaine I’m gonna have to go now. I hope you get lots of writing done! 😉 I might be on again Monday, but if not, probably Thursday, Friday and the weekend.

@rochellaine Thank you so much for reading my first chapter! I’ve never had anyone read my first drafts before. like, ever. thanks so much for your honesty and help! <3 😀

@rochellaine that would be great, yes.

@rochellaine okay, awesome! 🙂