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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus Oh, thanks. Is that like your website or something? 🙂
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 2 months ago
@i-j-anderson That’s amazing, Joy! It’s so cute!
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus I’ve had a couple of people read it, and I’m still interested in your offer of beta reading as well, but as for sharing with every one else, I want to wait, is all. So, if I wanted to send it just to you for now, how would I do that?
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 2 months ago
@i-j-anderson This is a cool idea! I love drawing characters (that doesn’t mean I’m always good at it 😛 Sometimes I get a gem, but it takes a lot of time sometimes) and I would also be interested in seeing what other people’s ideas for my characters would be.
Another thing I’d suggest we could do is after people draw other peoples’ character,…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@daues Oh, yes, that would work. Thanks.
But I think I’ll do that after I submit it to the contest. I’ll let you all know when I’m ready 🙂
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@ethryndal Thanks, I thought it a relief to to it this way, it means I didn’t have to think of a story and write it in 1,500 words or less – I just had to fix up existing one to be 1,500 words or less.
As for sharing, I’m not exactly sure, but @daeus said putting it in Google docs and sharing the link – though I’m not sure about that, because I…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
An update for those of you interested – I have mostly gotten the short story written. It’s actually a scene from a pre-existing longer book I wrote last year, which I had fixed and edited a bit to make sense as it’s own short story (removing irrelevant plotpoints, reintroducing the characters, things like that) I had asked the opinion of one of my…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Video 9: Theme & Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
@Aratrea Well… Hmm. I wouldn’t say the lessons have been focusing on physical conflicts rather than mental conflicts. It’s just the matter of tying the theme to the conflict. Something like your example of fear and courage is pretty easy to show through conflict. You can show a character running and hiding at the beginning, then standing up and…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper That’s not from Ratatouille is it?
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Hope Ann replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 10: Theme & Scene Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
@kate-flournoy He deserves to be a favorite, the poor guy.
And… I’m not going to use my trilogy for this lesson. It needs major thematic work and I’m not worrying about it right yet. Well, I am, but not here… Anyway, this is for the other novel I’ve mentioned. The one with the positive character arc where the MC’s experiment in living is…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Video 9: Theme & Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
This is for my trilogy again. I’m only plotting the points of the disillusionment arc part of it this time because I’m not quite sure of all the details of how I’m matching the plot with the positive character arc yet. (Do you have a lesson about how to weave themes into a story that involve mental and emotional conflict more than physical…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@clairec Oh, I have some competition, do I? 😛 Here ya go
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
Reposting this… cause I thought I posted it but it isn’t showing up. So of there end up being two of these posts, that is why.
@aratrea Hmm, yes. I think I remember that now. The last video I watched was on matching the character arc with the plot arc so that might have had something to do with it. Anyway, I reworked it. I’m pretty happy with…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
@aratrea Hmm, yes. I think I remember that now. The last video I watched was on matching the character arc with the plot arc so that might have had something to do with it. Anyway, I reworked it. I’m pretty happy with the disillusionment now, though I’m not quite sure how well the postive arc flows.
Round 1: The Disillusionment Arc
Starting…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Amnesia? in the forum Sci-Fi 9 years, 2 months ago
@rachelle Hmm, I don’t know. I mean, there are so many angles you can take. 😀 Amnesia is fun. I’d make sure you are showing the sinfulness of the characters before they start regaining their memories, though. It’s not the past/memories that make them sin, it is their heart.
As for the lost memory… let’s see. Random fun things: you could give…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Discussion for Video Three: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 2 months ago
@overcomer Thanks. 🙂 Yes, I love so many things about Lord of the Rings, but the theme of hope is one of my favorite things. 🙂
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Help me change this in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus hmm, well, don’t have to use itunes. I just use it because you can go down and change the story really easy and so get links for about a dozen different national stores/sites. I’m not sure how it works it other places or if you could use one Smashwords link for all of them. If you do, let me know how it goes. 🙂
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
This is a disillusionment arc which spans a trilogy. Or rather the first two books and the first quarter (probably) of the last book before shifting into a positive arc.
The MC’s experiment in living is that good will always win and victory over evil here on earth is inevitable so long as one gives their all to the fight. Her experiment in living…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Help me change this in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus First of all, CONGRATULATIONS!!! That is very exciting. 😀
Second of all, in regards to price matching, it is much quicker if you contact Amazon yourself. I tried alerting them through the thing you mentioned with my first novella and after I few weeks I was advised to contact them directly. It only took them a day or two to fix it after…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Amnesia? in the forum Sci-Fi 9 years, 2 months ago
@northerner *scowls* I’m hardly on here anymore. Sadly… Unless someone tags me, I don’t generally see it. But still… amnesia.
*grins and rubs hands*
@rachelle Not that I have much to add. It does seem like a cool idea. One I’d like to read. 😀
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