@kate-flournoy
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@daeus Oh no, you weren’t. We were actually having a conversation. With my brother, he would present his argument, and people would just call him bad names instead of countering with their side. He was making his case pretty well, so this morning the leader called him an “antiscience *bleep*” and banned him from the conversation.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
@hope, @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @spradlin, @faithdk, @rolena-hatfield, @gretald, @ingridrd, @his-instrument, @christi-eaton, @timothy-young, @anna-brie, @gideon-sowdon, @warrioroftherealm, @EVERYONE!!!!!
Tagging you all again. 🙂 Does anyone know if the Beast has a name? Or is he just Beast? -
Hope Ann replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@Kate-flournoy Oh look who has wifi! *runs off to type up email* *heads back* And yes, why should I care what people think? I care more about what someone says about my writing than what anyone says about me. 😉
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BlueJay started the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
@hope HELP!!!!!! (And anyone else) @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @spradlin, @faithdk, @rolena-hatfield, @gretald, @ingridrd, @his-instrument, @christi-eaton, @timothy-young, @anna-brie, @gideon-sowdon, @warrioroftherealm, @EVERYONE!!!!!
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BlueJay started the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
@hope HELP!!!!!! (And anyone else) @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @spradlin, @faithdk, @rolena-hatfield, @gretald, @ingridrd, @his-instrument, @christi-eaton, @timothy-young, @anna-brie, @gideon-sowdon, @warrioroftherealm, @EVERYONE!!!!!
I got a great idea, but the more I write it the more it…[Read more] -
BlueJay started the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
@hope HELP!!!!!! (And anyone else) @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @spradlin, @faithdk, @rolena-hatfield, @gretald, @ingridrd, @his-instrument, @chrisit-eaton, @timothy-young, @anna-brie, @gideon-sowdon, @warrioroftherealm, @EVERYONE!!!!!
I got a great idea, but the more I write it the more it…[Read more] -
Corissa Maiden of Praise replied to the topic I Have Arrived! in the forum Start HERE 10 years ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Or, simply, the Blade of Surprise. 😀
Hey, @kate-flournoy, this is your territory. *runs all over the internet looking for you* *drags you over here* 😉
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@kate-flournoy @daeus I just wanted to say, thank you guys for staying friendly when we were debating a while back. My brother has entangled himself in an evolution debate on a secular forum, and some of the evolutionist commenters are really mean. I’m glad it’s not like that on here.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@dragon-snapper I’d love to write. Sorry I’m a bit late. (@kate-flournoy is away on holiday, so she can’t write.)
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@bluejay @winter-rose @timothy-young @clairec @sarah-h @overcomer @kate-flournoy and @daeus (both of you whom I haven’t written with in a while) Do any of you want to write?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@bluejay @winter-rose @timothy-young @claire-c @sarah-h @overcomer @kate-flournoy and @daeus (both of you whom I haven’t written with in a while) Do any of you want to write?
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ClaireC posted an update 10 years ago
Current Status – boring my mother as I tell her the entire plot of my book, (over several days) complete with names, backstory, ghosts, lies, truths, Thing-your-character-wants, Thing-your-character-needs, plot twists, etc. The whole load. She’s very patient. I’m finding it very useful to verbalize all my ideas, making sure everything makes sense.…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Alternative Historical Fiction Book Premise in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
@daeus, @ingridrd, @gretald, @kate-flournoy, @jadamae, @anna-brie, emma-flournoy, @dragon-snapper, @blujay, @aratrea, @sarah-h, @winter-rose, @overcomer. I wrote out this long and detailed reply to you all, explaining all the things you were wondering about. And then…I accidentally shut down my computer and lost the whole thing! 🙁 So I’m sorry…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya started the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 10 years ago
So I’ve always wanted to know the answer to this question: What is everyone’s favorite type of structure and character arc? I’m talking about the Bell Curve, the Save the Cat! beats, the Hero’s Journey, the multiple act structure, the Three Act Structure (there are endless variations on this one, but I’m talking about the classic one), and there…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Lessons from a recent revision. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Yah. I totally get what you’re saying. I actually write everything like a movie. Like it shows everything as it is happening and (unfortunately) I barely enter into my viewpoint character’s mind (something I need to work on). However, once I read the book about showing and telling I really wanted to . . . liberate(?) my…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@Julia-r Ah, you found it! Welcome to the writers’ corner, where writers from all over the world find a time when they write at the exact same time to avoid distraction. So, say I asked you to write for an hour, we would write for an hour then meet back here to touch base, see how many words we wrote and compare. It’s more of an accountability…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@bluejay @overcomer @kate-flournoy @jess Would anyone like to write for a while?
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Daeus replied to the topic Lessons from a recent revision. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Hi, @Mark-Kamibaya, good to see you.
You’re right that overviews are essential, but I was arguing that they’re way too easy to overuse and that it’s best to always be critical of them.
To clear up what I was saying in my own novel, I was talking about any place in the novel where I overviewed events as if they happened in the past instead of…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Lessons from a recent revision. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Can I add something @Daeus? It’s about overviews. Or summaries. Or telling (instead of showing). After reading Showing & Telling: Learn How to Show & When to Tell for Powerful & Balanced Writing by Laurie Alberts I believe that summaries is rather essential to stories. I know that contradicts “show don’t tell” but hear me out.
You need to use…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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@anna-brie, sorry forgot the ‘@’ symbol in front of your name!
@clairec Thanks for the reminder. I’m sure I don’t thank Mommy enough for all that she does for us. I’ve begun to realize that she doesn’t have such a thing as free time; we 5 children take it all up. It’s hard for me to imagine making a sacrifice like that, every day, all my life like she has, and I really appreciate her. Three cheers for…[Read more]
@sarah-h. I call my parents Mummy and Daddy, but when I’m talking to other people, I generally say Mum and Dad.
@clairec It’s so true! My “mum” (I’m American, so I spell it “mom,” but I like the sound of “mum” more, for some reason… 😛 ) does so much for me, and I often take it for granted. 😉 Glad you’re able to sort out your plot and everything!
@gretald, Thanks! 🙂