Kate Flournoy

@ariel-ashira, I wish I had time to do that. sadly my self imposed deadline for my book is coming up, and I have to write a speech for my mom

@rochellaine, @ariel-ashira, y’all on?

One tip: try to match the mood of the tune with the mood of the words to as fine a degree as possible.

@rochellaine Nope. the only time I’ve heard that word is in Newsies, but it is a fun word. Though I think it’s slightly too comical for the situation 😀

Actually, I like the term “swells”, it is a bit old-fashioned, but I think it works with the more slang way of speaking the lower class would have. It’s also the term Enjolras uses to describe…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Cool, okay. 😀

Well, point one, I’m trying to think of a term I could use instead of the word “Aristocrat”, something which conveys a similar meaning, and that the revolutionaries could use contemptuously.

Secondly, could I ask you some questions about my novel?

Hey, anyone around. I’m writing ;D @jess-penrose @jane-maree @anyone

@rochellaine I know it’s Sunday for you, but maybe you’re around for discussions?

@devastate-lasting I’m actually not sure how to get to the resource library without resubscribing to KP, so I’m not seeing whatever you’re looking at. It sounds though like some of the resources that used to be there aren’t there anymore?

I’m thinking they might have gotten moved over to the Story Embers resource library. I know they have the…[Read more]

leaving, might be back

@filewriterbase13x, THIS IS FANTASTIC!

if you have space to add me you can, if not thats fine

@ariel-ashira, @ingridrd, @rochellaine, @seekjustice, @sam-kowel, @anyone-else

I’m here for a bit

@ariel-ashira, nice signature

@jenwriter17, what type of help do you need? is it with finding the melody? getting the lyrics to flow? just getting lyrics in general? or something else?

@filewriterbase13x  *appears from realm of the hiatus*

HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!

*disappears again*

@filewriterbase13x It’s not that I didn’t like Madelyn. I just found Frederick especially interesting. 🙂 Sorry if I’m being too critical…the story is good.

Ah, cool. I was wondering about that a bit, but I haven’t seen many typos. Part Four made me anxious for the next one.

@rochellaine  Welp.  I gotta go again.  Byeee!

@rochellaine  Same as yesterday.  The sequel for my fantasy WIP.  🙂  Wbu?

@rochellaine  I know I’m late, but I am here now (for a little while).  🙂

@filewriterbase13x That’s a nice start to a story. Here’s my honest critique.

1) I would almost say it’s too detailed. Let me explain: in chapter 1 there’s a lot of backstory and explaining of the MC’s past. To me it kind of bogged down the story. I would suggest telling some of it but saving other parts for later. It would also increase…[Read more]

@rochellaine  Oh!  So my director adapted the story of Cinderella for the stage (she wrote the script) and she also wrote the songs since it’s a musical.  There were a few changes made to the story like Ella’s dead mother comes back and transforms her dress, instead of a fairy-godmother.  Things like that.  🙂 😉