@kate-flournoy
Active 8 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Dystopian Time Travel Story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Ooh… oh boy. I volunteer for beta reading already. I’ve gotta run right now, so I’ll let this stew in my mind for a while, but believe me I will be getting back to you as soon as I can. Which will probably be sometime tomorrow. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Help with Romance in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Hm…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Help with Romance in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Oh.
Dare I ask if I am familiar with this… this other couple? 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Help with Romance in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
If you’re talking about Cyth and Analissa, @Hope, I’d definitely say you did a good job with that.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
You do have a nice big family, @Hannah-Krynicki! I have four brothers and five sisters— just the opposite! It’s quite an adventure, isn’t it? 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Unfortunately I think I need all the common sense I can get my hands on, @Daeus. 😛
And I will keep writing poetry.
Wow, I’m… I just… I’m still floored you liked it so much.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Egh, forgot the tag thingy.
@Daeus.😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Wow! I really did think it was terrible— just awful. I guess I’m not an objective judge. 😛 Thanks so much, Daeus— for everything.
Oh yes, the contradiction about the king deserting and all that… 😛 Actually the poem went through a backstory change in the middle of writing it, and I hadn’t yet got around to fixing it. 😛
And you know,…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Dear Imaginary Friend—
You asked for it.
Son of a Warrior
Love is sacrifice. Only with the gift of everything it is will it ever come into the fullness of everything it was meant to be.
The weary warrior in the night, riding true and fast and far,
with love of land and love of king to guide him, and a star,
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Kate Flournoy started the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
‘Kay, I’ve got a little problem here. As you know if you clicked on the topic. And if you didn’t, you aren’t even here… *gasp* I’m talking to someone who’s not even here!
Anyway.
I have this really long, rough poem that I started writing like… a year ago? It was the first real poem I ever tried… anyway, I’ve been wanting to finish it,…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Welcome to the forum @Hannah-Krynicki! Always glad to have a newbie on here. 🙂 The problem with newbies is, they don’t stay that way. 😉 😛
What kind of fantasy do you like to write? More of a historical style (like Tolkien) or incredibly fantastic fantasy? Like— really weird, awesome stuff that I don’t have a term for without going into a…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Series Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Hm… maybe ‘Seekers of Truth’… assuming there are people in the story who are actually seeking to find the answers.
Is there an overall theme for the series? Is it God’s existence, God’s grace, God’s love, God’s mercy, man’s relationship with God? I find it’s usually much easier to think of a title when I know the theme and am pulling the…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Series Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Here’s a quick idea—don’t know if it has any merit, but it struck me all of a sudden.
Legends of Light.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Series Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Hm… I’ll have to think on that one. 😛 I’ll let you know if I come up with anything especially brilliant. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Good Bet (Short Story) in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Hey, @writefury! Sorry, I didn’t notice you’d posted or I would have gotten back to you sooner. 😛
I love this story— everything about it. The casually western feel, the quiet vividness of the MC… and the emotional hook with Owen Morgan. All the characters were well done, the dialogue was fantastic, and the last line was perfect. Tied it all…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Oh— and another new favorite.
Rose of Prophecy, by @Hope Schmidt. 😀
Seriously. Which says a lot for her, because when someone reads a book specifically to pick holes in it (I beta read it for her) they generally can’t get over the mistakes. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
I just finished a book I’d never heard of in my life before— my grandma lent it to me. It’s called ‘Beyond Sing the Woods’, and is by Trygve Gulbranssen. TRIG-VEE GULL-bran-sen.
That. Book. Was. Fantastic.
It’s a classic, and so can be a little slow and meandering at times, but it has got to make at least the top ten favorite books for me.…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Best Book Ever in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
And then there are the really sad stories. King Saul. King Solomon. King David, even, though his started out so well. All of their stories did, in fact. From redemption to rejection.
But thankfully not all the stories are like that. My favorite New Testament hero is Paul— his story is absolutely mindblowing. And Peter— a story of fear and…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Best Book Ever in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
And then there are the really sad stories. King Saul. King Solomon. King David, even, though his started out so well. All of their stories did, in fact. From redemption to rejection.
But thankfully not all the stories are like that. My favorite New Testament hero is Paul— his story is absolutely mindblowing. And Peter— a story of fear and…[Read more]
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