Cloaked Mystery

@raxforge @jonas @loopylin

Baron (Brutus)—Ben Gunn, Flare, Ellis, trying to find Fel and Brea (I think I got that right)

Brutus hesitated in following the others. The soldiers were terrified of these creatures. He held his scarf up over his nose and mouth. His eyes followed the disappearing forms of his companions. He could use his wind to…[Read more]

@jonas

Cool, I will love to hear your thoughts then!

@stephie

I’ve also tried writing textbooks.

This. Writing the information in textbook form is my favorite way to format it.

I also use Google docs and fill out the whole thing with general information, such as flora and fauna, science, tech, etc. History is by far the longest section.

Does anyone have advice for outlining magic systems? I’m looking at you, @jonas . Or really anyone. I would like to be more organized with it, but I’ve never known where to start.

Tags!

@ellette-giselle @koshka @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @rae @freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofaetherium @liberty @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @grcr @the_lost-journal @jonas @linus-smallprint @IthinkIgotmostactivepeoplebutI’mnotsuresoifIforgotyouI’msorry

@jonas

😳😬 My bad, I thought it was a she. But I guess not. What the normal procedure for misgendering a character, 10 lashes, banishment, or what? Lol, jk

@jonas

okay, thx

@jonas and @the_lost-journal are you guys at sea? If so, I might want to add another pirate… >:]

I’m going for it.

@jonas @rae @loopylin

Flare and Ben Gunn – Elderstrand (w/ Baron, Jenna, and Ellis going to follow Felicity)

Ben and Flare looked at each other and suddenly started running after Ellis. They caught up to her and where still running. “Who are we running from again?” Ben asked, huffing and puffing and running.

@jonas

Ok, I’ll try to do something, hopefully before Snow Camp.

@jonas

I agree with basically everyone not to kill it. If it helps I can RP to help things keep moving.

@jonas If you give me a description of the new monsters that are being released into the city (forgot what they’re called), then I can do a rp sometime today or tomorrow

@jonas

No no no continue!

@jonas

Pause? It doesn’t need to be officially dead, but I don’t know if there’s enough interest right now to continue.

@the_lost-journal

But Kefa, think, if you thought all of us are kids, and most of us our in our late teens and early twenties, do you think we’ll get boring just because we stop being on KP?

like whaley said, it’s a while away for most of us, and when that time comes we can see what to do. I’m pretty sure @jonas and @linus-smallprint do stuff…[Read more]

@jonas

Thank you again for your help!!!

@jonas

whoaaaa

that was a lot 😅😅

thank you for all your help, it is appreciated!!

however, I’m not looking for so much of a detailed critique as I have in the past. This is still a really rough draft and I know there’s a lot of messy sentences and chapters. I’m mostly looking for critiques to see if the pacing is good and if it makes more…[Read more]

@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]

@theducktator

Thanks for the votes.

@hybridlore @keilah-h@rae@loopylin @theshadow@arcticanimals @Esther-c @jonas

The votes are in, and right now there’s a bit of a tie between two of the characters and the challenge, so we’re going to figure out how to decide each.

@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae@loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @Esther-c @jonas @theducktator

Okay, so right now some of the votes are tied so Kefa and I decided to extend the deadline to the 3rd, so please vote. We’ll release the results around then and hopefully have the next chapter out within the next few weeks.