@jonas
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*Searches through previous pages* Oki, here we go.
@jonas @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @grcr
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1, aka Rogan, Marcel, Leon, Julian, Sara, and Marcellus)
“We have to move. Now. No more time for arguing. They’re almost here.”
Marcel heard the man more clearly than he had earlier, although the voice split his head. T…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Flare and Ben Gunn – Elderstrand (w/ Baron, Jenna, and Ellis trying to head to the river)
With all the confusion, Ben and Flare had a hard time moving through the rushing crowd. Flare looked at Ben, then up to rooftops. “Up?”
Ben shrugged, “For the third time today, why not?” He was more sarcastic when he said thi…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay thanks!
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Can these creatures climb? Wait, what are they called again?
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Personally, I would at least have given it the limitation that the objects are still bound by their physical natures, because if you can literally make objects teleport, is there anything you can’t do?
That’s what I was thinking. But the stuff definitely moved wherever he wanted, and it wasn’t clarified whether or not he was creating t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Brea—with the rescue group headed to the river
Brea stopped running as she heard a horrible sound coming from the center of the city. Felicity stopped as well, right behind her, resting her hands on her knees and catching her breath. Brea turned to her with wide eyes.
“What was that?”
“I don’t know,” Felicity sai…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@jonas That’s a cool system. So soulforging works on any metal object? Do you have any characters with enchanted jewelry then?
Thanks!
Yes, it works on any metal. I haven’t completely decided yet, but metals might have varying properties that makes some better for certain things, but any metal could be Soulforged in some way. (Of co…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@jonas That’s a cool system. So soulforging works on any metal object? Do you have any characters with enchanted jewelry then?
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Loopy replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Your magic system has some interesting parallels to a magic system called Awakening from a book called Warbreaker. Have you heard of or read it?
No I haven’t, but it sounds interesting.
If you want me to, I can give you a brief description of how it works.)
Sure! (Don’t worry, I won’t plagiarize lol)
What is the process of using Ink to b…
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.
Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.
Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Ellis, and Jenna following after Felicity.
Brutus watched the creatures coming his way, dropping down his scarf. He didn’t know if the small band could out run the things. Could he muster enough wind to carry them away? He could try. A powerful wind came to him, and he turned…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Flare and Ben Gunn – Elderstrand (w/ Baron, Jenna, and Ellis going to follow Felicity)
“That’s awfully spic- HOLY!!” Ben said as he turned around staring at the swarm of creatures.
Flare turned around with Ben, “Why do I have to be out of spells?”
The swarm started to get closer to them. Ben nodded, “We should r…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Thanks! I guess it just sounds worse in my head.
It seems a bit limitless to me, I guess. It can bring anything to life, including just plain drawings made with the ink (Benny, from the adventure role play, if you remember him). Is that too overpowered or vague? I could just be too hypercritical of my own writing lol
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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So, I thoug…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Magic systems are such a struggle sometimes. Sometimes it’s something as simple as the elemental power of fire, and sometimes it is something as complicated as the periodic table of elements. They are so fun, and yet so hard to get right. XD
This is a topic to branch off the new world-building topic, so @raxforge , I dedicate this to you, and to…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Yeah, that makes total sense. He is only relatable for some people. It’s impossible to relate to every character, but you can still like them. And I’m glad Sanderson gave him several things to work through, specifically in WoR. :-]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Baron (Brutus)—Ben Gunn, Flare, Ellis, trying to find Fel and Brea (I think I got that right)
Brutus hesitated in following the others. The soldiers were terrified of these creatures. He held his scarf up over his nose and mouth. His eyes followed the disappearing forms of his companions. He could use his wind to…[Read more]
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