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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else
Okay….
I have come to a decision lol
I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.
Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]
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Kefa the Avocado elf replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper @loopylin @theshadow  @arcticanimals @jonas @esther-c and @theducktator
Hello everyone again! I am going to be taking another “break” from KP! But it isn’t going to be exactly the same. I am trying to unplug for winter break and I will take out my computer to…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Kefa the Avocado elf replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 1 week ago
oh yeah, thanks!
also,
@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @arcticanimals theducktator @esther-c @jonas and @liberty
sorry, forgot to mention! Time is up for voting! Thanks to everyone who participated! Shadow and I are working on chapter 1, danger on the rapids, as much as we can! We are hoping…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 month, 1 week ago
Yay, it’s out!! 😁
Hmm… @kyronthearcanin, @keilah-h, @jonas, and @liberty might also be interested.
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Ben Gunn and Flare – Rooftop gang
“Stay down you dirty bird,” Ben said as the last guard fell to the ground. He looked around, “Where did Felic… oh, whatever her name is go?”
“I don’t know,” Flare was panting, “I told them that they should leave to keep the kid safe.”
Ben nodded, “Makes sense. Should we try to find her?”
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
this is long, sorry
Brea– Elderstrand, Rooftop team
Brea gave a surprised shout as someone landed in front of her and knocked down the two men holding her. She stumbled back and tripped, landing in the mud. Another figure jumped over her while she was down and attacked the third man. Brea recognized the white hair i…[Read more]
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Kefa the Avocado elf replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 1 week ago
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Loopylin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
It might help to get the first part of Group 1 (wounded, non-fighters, etc) to the river so we aren’t scrabbling to get everyone there after this side mission.
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Kefa the Avocado elf replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
So my charries have done nothing???? And I haven’t been tagged in this since the month you made it… So am I just kicked?
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Ben Gunn and Flare – Elderstrand, Rooftop team
Ben and Flare looked at each other, Flare nodded. Ben gave a shout, “Tallyho!” Both leaped from the roof into the crowded street. Ben rushed to the last guard; their swords clashed with sparks.
Flare ran to the girl, “How are you lass? Hold still while I just…” *clank* F…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Baron (Brutus) and Jenna—Elderstrand, Rooftop Team
Brutus caught sight of the girl, and the wind that whipped about him grew stronger. He helped Jenna the last bit to the rooftop, before acting. There was a blur as he rushed down to the guards, punching one in the chin, and kicking the other in the stomach.
I’ll…[Read more]
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Ben Gunn and Flare – Elderstrand, Rooftop team
Ben cracked his back, “Sure, since that’s all we ever get to do on this God forsaken world.”
Flare chuckled, “Is there ever a time when you’re not complaining?”
Ben cracked his neck, “A lot of different times, but mostly when I’m asleep.”
Flare snorted and shook his head. “…[Read more]
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
With Fel’s merry rooftop-leaping band
That is a fantastic name. Sounds like people who steal from the rich, give to the poor, and also play folk music on the side ✨
Felicity — Elderstrand, Rooftop team
Finally Benny stopped and took shelter under a tree. The rain had nearly washed him away so he was barely a smudge on the…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
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Kefa the Avocado elf replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Yay!
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