Cloaked Mystery

@jonas

*faints*

*wakes up*

HOW! I knew this was a bad idea! Now I feel like a little brother who is playing with his older siblings on smash bros but his controller isn’t even charged! OR ON!

@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty

Okay, ik this is very random. But am I really that young?!

I thought at least 50% of you guys were in high school! But I just learned that ellette is SEVEN TEEN! So now I feel really…[Read more]

@jonas

Thank you again for your help!!!

@jonas

whoaaaa

that was a lot 😅😅

thank you for all your help, it is appreciated!!

however, I’m not looking for so much of a detailed critique as I have in the past. This is still a really rough draft and I know there’s a lot of messy sentences and chapters. I’m mostly looking for critiques to see if the pacing is good and if it makes more…[Read more]

@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]

@theducktator

Thanks for the votes.

@hybridlore @keilah-h@rae@loopylin @theshadow@arcticanimals @Esther-c @jonas

The votes are in, and right now there’s a bit of a tie between two of the characters and the challenge, so we’re going to figure out how to decide each.

@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae@loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @Esther-c @jonas @theducktator

Okay, so right now some of the votes are tied so Kefa and I decided to extend the deadline to the 3rd, so please vote. We’ll release the results around then and hopefully have the next chapter out within the next few weeks.

@grcr

Yes I can relate to the thankfulness of God’s mercy (no chance I deserve it)

It’s mostly in the brainstorming phase

@jonas

Ooh cool

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah I think for me I had to take a complete step back in a way to show God I’m willing and because of that I think He was able to open my eyes to the in-person peopl…[Read more]

@power  @ellette-giselle  @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper  @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity

Some people…[Read more]

@jonas
greetings!!

and am I allowed to ask what your profile-picture is suppose to be?

@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @theshadow @the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle @thearcaneaxiom @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @kyronthearcanin @anyone-else

@ellette-giselle @jonas (let me know if I’m tagging you too much, I know you’re probably busy!!!!) this goes for anyone else too, please let me know if you’d like me to stop tagging you lol @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Here’s a second half of the Lilitu chapter:

(Again, this is unedited so this won’t be the finished product, this is…[Read more]

@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @theshadow  @arcticanimals @Esther-c @Jonas and @theducktator

Okay, so merry Christmas guys! Chapter 1 is out on page 9! hope you guys read through it and enjoy! Make sure to vote on who you want to see eliminated and what challenge the contestants participate in next! And thank you to those who voted! <3

I…[Read more]

@jonas

Perfect, thanks.

@keilah-h

Lol, that’s okay. Do you want to vote for which character you would like to see gone?

Uh, idk who’s participating in this, so here’s some tags.

@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @arcticanimals theducktator @esther-c @jonas @liberty

@power  @ellette-giselle  @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper  @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin [Read more]

I’m done with my 650 words!

Maybe I’ll post them later.

But now it is time for REVENGE 😈

@jonas 💨⚪4x

@theducktator 💨⚪4x

@linus-smallprint 💨⚪4x

@grcr 💨⚪2x

@rae 💨⚪2x

@savannah_grace2009 💨⚪2x

@raxforge 💨⚪2x

@esther-c💨⚪2x

*laughs in…

@ellette-giselle

Yess!!!! Please participate! I’d love to have my favorite-KPer-to-snowball participate! Especially if we’re on the same team. You write a LOT.

@theducktator

@help-I’m-out-of-tags

Sure thing! @power @raxforge @trailblazer @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @keilah-h @jonas
@calyhuge @theshadow @mineralizedwrit…[Read more]