@jonas
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic hello in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 5 months ago
V. In the morning when I first get up, especially on a saturday, with some delicious chai tea.
Finally! Someone else who agrees with me! (Though I like a black tea steeped with vanilla better then chai.)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I haven’t been in the mood to rp. At this point I owe you one for disappearing so long. I’m sorry. :/ Ev and Tyne are gonna go their own way so I don’t hold anyone up, cuz I don’t know when I’ll be in the mood to write another pov.
Evelyn
“You may follow or go your own way as you choose,” the creature said. Then it continued down…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@rae YES! Tagging some people…
@whalekeeper @raxforge @esther-c @grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theshadow @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @beth-torres @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin @elishavet-pidyon @allthekeepers
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RAE replied to the topic Jitterz and His Coffee Mayhem in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
Tagging ppl!
@ellette-giselle @jonas @whalekeeper @theshadow @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @grcr @keilah-h
Sorry if I’m annoying you guys.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Evelyn
Tyne’s saying they were lost may have been a bit much. They weren’t exactly lost… they just hadn’t searched enough yet. The exit couldn’t have been to far……… right……? Apparently they weren’t the only ones here though… so were there even more people—or creatures—wandering around like they were? How strange it all was.
“You.”…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Sorry I disappeared—these past days were really busy…
Yes, she was. I find her fun to right, and it had been since then since I’d RPed her, so I decided to use her here.
Ah, ok cool.
Evelyn
Not the answer Evy was expecting, but oh well.
“Oh—no, no I’m not,” Evelyn shifted her weight from one foot to the other. She glanced back…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Sorry it’s long….
Tyne
They’d been walking for a while now. Perhaps in circles…? If none of the doors opened, would that… would that mean they were stuck… really really stuck? Tyne pulled tighter on her backpack straps, holding them to keep her hands for shaking from fear. She looked up at Evelyn, “Aren’t you scared a…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Welcome.
Other than me, there’s Whaley, RAE, Keilah, Ducktator, Esther, and GRCR (I think that’s it, you guys let me know if I forgot anyone). Whaley and RAE’s characters are together, and so are Keilah and Ducktator’s, Esther’s and mine are alone, and I don’t think GRCR has RPed yet.
Nothing’s really going on, characters are just…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Did you know they’re also releasing preview chapters on this site?
h ttps://reactormag.com/columns/wind-and-truth (remove the space after the ‘h’)
*does happy dance* That is awesome!!!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
YOU’RE ALIVE!!
ALSO,
They come out every Monday at noon (I think), and I think they’re planning on releasing an entire third of the book this way.
WHAT????
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Just tagging everyone I did last time… 🤪
@theducktator @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @whalekeeper @theshadow @mineralizedwritings @grcr @rae @loopylin @acancello @keilah-h @hybridlore @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @thearcaneaxiom @everyoneee
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 7 months ago
NOOO KP ATE MY POST UGH
@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @esther-c @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @theducktator @theshadow @anyone-else-following-my-novel
I made a playlist of my novel!!!!!!!
I saw this thing on Pinterest and just had to do it XD XD

I also did the songs for each chapter. I didn’t do…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I take it this chapter is before some of the ones you already wrote, since it shows them preparing to leave the house? Or are they moving a second time?
Huh? I’m confused. They’re moving a second time. They never moved the first time, because they already lived in Wrallethom Heights before the Pythonos made everyone else move there too. So…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
No, you’re fine!!!
I just can never seem to think things through before I say them! I reply too fast…
Thanks for helping me, this gave me a lot to think about! (you too @jonas !) Today I developed sooo much of the plot thanks to you guys!
No it wasn’t your mistake, it was MY mistake…I still feel bad for confusing everybody…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
But there’s a problem there. When we chose to live in sin, or even directly comit evil, there is still hope for us until death. Even the vilest of sinner can be redeemed by the blood of Christ. If you make Pythonos unredeemable, you are almost saying that the blood of Christ is not enough for them. You know? Which is why r…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks @jonas
Yeah, I think we just hit the major plot-hole. I think you need something between Pythonos and people. You see, even the most depraved of people do not become demons. They can certainly become demon possessed, but they themselves will not become demons. And Christ has the power to cast out demons. (I can find…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Lilitu was kind of my “you’re never too far gone” person, because his parents are Jraldath and Selena! There’s going to be this epic confrontation scene where he wrestles with the knowledge that he was meant to be evil from the moment he was born. Does that work? Or do I still need Cassian?
Because that’s a good idea, but I feel like…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @grcr and @highscribe (CASSIAN SCENE) idk who else to tag @jonas (don’t read this if you don’t feel like it, or are busy…)
Chapter 14
A New Adventure
Sef stood in the kitchen, tears pricking behind her eyes.
The house was so empty…so vacant. It felt wrong.
Her heavy pack dug into her shoulders, an ever present reminder o…[Read more]
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