@jonas
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 hours ago
Brea—with the rescue group headed to the river
Brea stopped running as she heard a horrible sound coming from the center of the city. Felicity stopped as well, right behind her, resting her hands on her knees and catching her breath. Brea turned to her with wide eyes.
“What was that?”
“I don’t know,” Felicity sai…[Read more]
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 42 minutes ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 43 minutes ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 50 minutes ago
@jonas That’s a cool system. So soulforging works on any metal object? Do you have any characters with enchanted jewelry then?
Thanks!
Yes, it works on any metal. I haven’t completely decided yet, but metals might have varying properties that makes some better for certain things, but any metal could be Soulforged in some way. (Of co…[Read more]
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 hours, 12 minutes ago
@jonas That’s a cool system. So soulforging works on any metal object? Do you have any characters with enchanted jewelry then?
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 hours, 19 minutes ago
Your magic system has some interesting parallels to a magic system called Awakening from a book called Warbreaker. Have you heard of or read it?
No I haven’t, but it sounds interesting.
If you want me to, I can give you a brief description of how it works.)
Sure! (Don’t worry, I won’t plagiarize lol)
What is the process of using Ink to b…
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 10 minutes ago
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 17 hours ago
Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.
Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.
Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]
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Kefa the Avocado elf replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
No one in my area is RPing… 🤧😢
SO I will just continue the RP 🙁 Until someone joins in.
Jirah, Rosemary and Rapha, Elderstand deepwater. (W/idk who! >:(. )
“Jirah!” Rosemary yelled, seeing Jirah submerge in the water. She stabbed the serpent with more arrows, and ran to the front of the boat. “I need…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 15 hours ago
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Ellis, and Jenna following after Felicity.
Brutus watched the creatures coming his way, dropping down his scarf. He didn’t know if the small band could out run the things. Could he muster enough wind to carry them away? He could try. A powerful wind came to him, and he turned…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 17 hours ago
Flare and Ben Gunn – Elderstrand (w/ Baron, Jenna, and Ellis going to follow Felicity)
“That’s awfully spic- HOLY!!” Ben said as he turned around staring at the swarm of creatures.
Flare turned around with Ben, “Why do I have to be out of spells?”
The swarm started to get closer to them. Ben nodded, “We should r…[Read more]
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 4 hours ago
Thanks! I guess it just sounds worse in my head.
It seems a bit limitless to me, I guess. It can bring anything to life, including just plain drawings made with the ink (Benny, from the adventure role play, if you remember him). Is that too overpowered or vague? I could just be too hypercritical of my own writing lol
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
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So, I thoug…[Read more]
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Loopylin started the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 1 hour ago
Magic systems are such a struggle sometimes. Sometimes it’s something as simple as the elemental power of fire, and sometimes it is something as complicated as the periodic table of elements. They are so fun, and yet so hard to get right. XD
This is a topic to branch off the new world-building topic, so @raxforge , I dedicate this to you, and to…[Read more]
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Loopylin replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 3 days, 3 hours ago
Yeah, that makes total sense. He is only relatable for some people. It’s impossible to relate to every character, but you can still like them. And I’m glad Sanderson gave him several things to work through, specifically in WoR. :-]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 5 hours ago
Baron (Brutus)—Ben Gunn, Flare, Ellis, trying to find Fel and Brea (I think I got that right)
Brutus hesitated in following the others. The soldiers were terrified of these creatures. He held his scarf up over his nose and mouth. His eyes followed the disappearing forms of his companions. He could use his wind to…[Read more]
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Loopylin replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 5 hours ago
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Loopylin replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 7 hours ago
I also use Google docs and fill out the whole thing with general information, such as flora and fauna, science, tech, etc. History is by far the longest section.
Does anyone have advice for outlining magic systems? I’m looking at you, @jonas . Or really anyone. I would like to be more organized with it, but I’ve never known where to start.
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Andrew replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 8 hours ago
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Kefa the Avocado elf replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 18 hours ago
Ellis
Who is named Ellis? Because there is a kid at my school named that… and he is *grimace*
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