Cloaked Mystery

@highscribeofaetherium

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have some cracked or broken ribs (which could damage internal organs), and/or a concussion. And if he was knocked out/unconscious for long…

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@savannah_grace2009

Ok, I read the part, and I think it’s a good introduction to Lilitu. I don’t know if you want critiques, so try I’ll keep it at a minimum.

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oops, I missed you guys’ entire conversation, my bad

@keilah-h

It’s what they use in game in the Harry Potter series. You catch it, you win the game, though there are other ways to win the game. Don’t ask me how you play, I wouldn’t be able to tell you.

@whalekeeper

I will get to this in juuuuust a second. I think Ruth is on a Christmas trip because she hasn’t appeared in a while.

Actually, I had nothing to post for a few days so I kinda just forgot about KP, and took a break… now I’m back with drawings Andrew really wants me to post, and writings about Baron, and 77 notifications and loads a…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @ loopylin

Merry Christmas!

@loopylin

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

@savannah_grace2009

Yay, another section! I’ll read it after Christmas, cuz that’s probably when I’ll have time.

@keilah-h

I agree!!!

WHATTTTT

twenty seven!!!!

that’s crazy!

@keilah-h

The beginning has changed SO. MUCH.

The storyline/plot is pretty similar, but it’s definitely different…

@hybridlore @theshadow

Thank you for sharing that experience Hybrid, though I haven’t necessarily dealt with these same trials, I do know pain and doubt. I don’t want to force myself into this conversation, but I just wanted to say that God is aware of you both, and He wants to end your suffering, but there is a plan in all things. Anxiety is…[Read more]

@grcr

Wow, nice, that’s really good!

@elishavet-pidyon
Oh, that’s lovely!

@theducktator

XD

@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

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