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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel swiped back the curtains, but all he saw was ivy growing over the window. He sighed, then thought he heard Lucy talking. Turning around, he saw her by a wardrobe, steps inside it spiraling up into another part of the strange house. “Huh? Did you say something?” He resisted the urge to touch his ears again, hoping…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Yay!
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel could barely hear her, his hearing temporarily dulled. His gaze shifted to her once he realized she was speaking. “They’re…” His voice sounded distant, dull, as if his voice box was buried underground. “Okay. I think. I…don’t know. We should…keep going.”
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I think basically everyone on KP would enjoy that.
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel hesitated, shoulders trembling slightly. He removed his right hand, burying his face in his elbow, fingernails digging into his shoulder, and yelled.
Eventually the voices faded back down to their whispers, Gabriel’s shoulders still trembling slightly, but he…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Gabriel Mai
At the mention of other children saying such things to Lucy, Gabriel visibly bristled. “I agree, at least in your case.” Silently, his thoughts were running through what he would do to someone who ever said that to her, but Lucy didn’t need to know those thoughts. “But in my case, I wonder if they were right at…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
My CC tutor’s granddaughter is named Lucy. She looks nothing like your Lucy, but every week we get a dose of cute baby pictures because we can’t resist and neither can my tutor.
Now every time I read your rps, what pops into my mind are big, curious eyes, and extremely fluffy pink baby slippers XD.
Gabriel Mai
“It can be stuffy,”…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel grabbed his mask, not yet putting it on, but letting it slide down until the red ribbon hung about his neck. He grabbed his bag, and Lucy’s hatchet, following her.
“Here.” He handed her the hatchet. “I’ll teach you how to use it later. If you’re going to carry something like that, you should know how to defend…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
AWWW Thank you 😊. That’s awesome! I’m glad she likes him, I might end up writing his story after I do some more with Baron.
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I need criticism on this sketch. Especially the hair

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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@mineralizedwritings @linus-smallprint
OH MY GOODNESS!!!!! It looks awesome!!!!! I love it!!!!
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Gabriel
Gabriel nodded, though he would prefer she slept more. “I assume we should continue then.” Gabriel stooped down and picked up a loose piece of twine he had missed on the floor from his earlier escapade. “I think I collected all your little things when you fell…Are you sure you don’t want to rest more? We aren’t going to…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 2 months, 3 weeks ago
XD But actually, in my memory (until you just recapped it) he was going to turn himself in and then they were attacked and he was killed protecting Jenna (?) and her family. I like that ending because Baron gave his life for someone instead of taking life…. but then that is also cliche for a redemption story (and cliche is not a…
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Gabriel Mai
“I…don’t hear a man’s voice. At least, I don’t think so. It’d have to be a strange one.” He shook his head. “It doesn’t matter. Try to sleep again if you can.”
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RAE replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 3 weeks ago
A few things:
1. I have not collapsed or needed to go to the ER, and my doctor said that she’s happy to see I’m apparently improving faster than normal which she hoped. Still feels like forever, but recovery usually takes 2-4 years, so I guess I’m doing okay.
2. While that’s not a problem, my eating habits are. I don’t usually eat much, I don’t…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Gabriel
“Him?” The voices in Gabriel’s head sounded like many, their voices shrill like a withered banshee spirits, groping at his mind. “Are you hearing voices as well?” He hoped she wasn’t. He hated the voices. Every moment he felt himself wanting more and more to shout at them, even though he knew it would be in vain. He wanted…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Jealous. I’m in an art slump. Not happy with anything I draw, which might mean I’m on the cusp of a breakthrough…? But not counting on it.
Oof, yeah. I get that. I had that for a literal year once, then I started drawing again, and now I’ve been off and on. I’ll draw fervently for like a week or two usually, then hit art block for a…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
They’ve had good a mock trial and some awesome debate issues in the past (like arguing the death penalty, but you can’t bring in the Bible, only from a logos, ethos, and pathos standpoint)
Sounds good!
How is your work going? I think I had the same debate topic once, not sure. I’m sorry it’s not a pleasant task for you…
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RAE replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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RAE started the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 2 months, 3 weeks ago
If you haven’t read the Baron Chronicles and don’t want a huge spoiler, please don’t read.
So, for those who have read the Baron Chronicles, quick recap. Baron is an assassin who turns away from being an assassin to, originally, find some kind of good in the world to do, feeling beyond forgiveness. Obviously, he does end up getting saved.
But…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 4 weeks ago
I really should have replied earlier, I’m sorry. I should be available now for a while if you’re having a night owl night, because I have a debate due this Wednesday and am not prepared really at all. Our resolution is “is Civil Disobedience in a democracy morally correct?” And um…I find it to be their attempt to make us learn…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Been a while since I posted on here, but I would like a little feedback for this little creation in Canva from 3 in the morning (I really need help sleeping.)
Obviously, this won’t be the actual cover (you kidding, I still have a little ways to go before that), this is just me having fun.

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