Cloaked Mystery

It’s also a major plot twist lol

@everyone

What do you guys think of this scene….

It’s kind of messy but it’s also supposed to be that way, like it’s a flashback…I’m trying to make it a little confusing, but not too much.

When Nami dared to open her eyes, she breathed a sigh of relief.

The men were gone.

Tigin had screamed at her, threatening her with matches and a…

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@the_lost-journal

YAYYYYY you’re back!!!!!

*throws confetti*

@keilah-h
Aww tysmmm

@lightoverdarkness6

Girl thank you so much <333

@the_lost-journal

It’s a weekend camp some people from my church go to every year. It’s in winter, so that’s why it’s called snow camp (though it doesn’t seem like there’s gonna be any snow this year :/). I’m leaving tomorrow.

I’m 15.

I don’t like math so I didn’t care to do it!( ^-^)

I relate to this sentence lol.

Also, your signature is funny.

@rae

Alright! I’ll try to get some feedback to you later today, it might take a bit.

@highscribeofaetherium

Sentenced by sentence would be greatly appreciated.

@rae

I read the first part, and this is great! Are you looking more for a sentence-by-sentence critique, or just overall feedback?

Today if I can.

@jonas

Ok, I’ll try to do something, hopefully before Snow Camp.

@the_lost-journal

lol, it’s alright, glad to have you back 👍

@ellette-giselle

Thanks, you can tell by the following post that I got the reaction I wanted from her, lol

@the_lost-journal

Aw, sorry to hear that mate. Hopefully see you around Lord willing

@rae

Thanks 😊

You know your a writer when you have dozens and dozens of story ideas and you haven’t even started writing one.

@loopylin

lol, I know, but I like curtesy

@theducktator

You know you’re a writer when a Francis Schaefer video is discussing what happens when there is no Christian base for science and you’re taking notes for a dystopian novel.

Lol. This just made my day a little brighter.

@whalekeeper @theshadow

Tenz

Tenz didn’t reply. He wanted to shrink into a corner. Reid was out cold. Barnes had tried to attack him. He didn’t trust Rowen, Pencil, and Emeline.

Without Reid, Tenz felt like a lost child among strangers in a strange land, longing for something he recognized. He gripped Omi’s jacket tightly.