Cloaked Mystery

@keilah-h

also I’m still laughing about “bRiNg a MeLoN” lollll

It’s my favorite thing ever hahaha

@keilah-h

yessss I get like this too, I decide a scene is cringey, but I like it too much to remove it.

YES YES YES YES YESSSSSS

that’s the most relatable thing I’ve heard XDXD

What are they gonna do to Sef’s little sis?

Well…its kinda a long story and it’s gonna give away a lot (I also need to flesh out the plot wayyy more)

When I have all m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

However, I have also gotten far enough to determine something else. Due to some things such as the romance, I don’t think am in the target audience for your story. I am no longer going to read this. This does not mean your story is bad, it just means that it’s not for me and I think others will be able to give you better fee…

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@stephie

I HAVE RIZZ

slayyyy

@the_lost-journal

omccc

I like your name!!! It’s so cool!!!

yeah, just like Hybridlore, I didn’t know if it was your real name or not lol…

But it’s so unique and cool!

I’ve been pronouncing it “Kee-fa” *dies laughing*

@koshka @loopylin

Rax and Ben

Rax took out a similar piece of parchment and looked at it. “Um I don’t know… maybe we can ask someone…” He caught sight of what seemed to be two sisters. “Um, excuse me, do you either of you know where the Foreign Literature class is?”

Is this good?

@keilah-h

I mean I understand they have to have some water in order to live, but didn’t you say somewhere else that Azers don’t like water? Or did I completely misunderstand and that’s just a Ottoline/Naami thing?

So I’m not completely sure about that XDXD

Mainly, they just are very possessive of their lands and don’t want trespassers XD especia…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Girl you should legit be an editor hahahaha you’ve always been sooooo good with critiques!!!

Thank you so muchhhhh

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHH GIRL I LOVE FANTASY <333333 it’s my favoriteeee I’m so excited!

@the_lost-journal

I skimmed through this, and your WIP’s sound SO COOL!

I love them!

@grcr

Just finished reading through all your chapters… man, I dont even know what to say…

Must read moreeeeee. WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Aw girlie thank you so much… <33

Eloy is my favorite… Aubrielle is probably second. And, since he hasn’t done anything yet that I can see, Cassian is also a fav.

AWWWWW

Why Eloy thoughhhh he kinda just drops off the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Omc thank you so much girl, that means a lot…you’re gonna make me cryyyy

Ahhh thank youuuu 😭😭💜💜💜💜💜

Your critique was EXACTLY what I was looking for, so thank you!!!

–Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

YAYYYY!!! That’s one of the things I was worried about, and I’m s…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I know, it’s still just a little bit creepy.

@the_lost-journal

Ah, ok, that’s cool!

Also, your signature is CREEPY.

@the_lost-journal

Cool, all your WIPs sound neat! So are TKOK and P.I.C.A.F.E. set on this earth?  How does that work with the fantasy elements?

@the_lost-journal

oop, uhh, I will make a topic for it!!!!!!!!!

Sounds good😂

Nice, because I know other denominations just forgive to one another… 😬 that sounds worse.

And of course, we should reconcile ourselves with our fellow man, especially those we have wronged, but man cannot forgive sin, only God, and by extension those He’s given a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

but i prefer this method

As someone who does Jiujitsu, that meme made my day, lol

@theducktator

LOL

@loopylin

Hey! Another 21 pilots fan! I would say they are my favorite band