Cloaked Mystery

30k words in The Baron Chronicles!!!!!!!

@hybridlore

Thank you soooo much girl…

@theducktator

Really?? tysmmm that means a lot <3

@grcr

Great! Thanks! 🙂

@grcr I request your services

Name: Rax

Age: 17-18

Personality: Fun, lighthearted, playful. Often smiling in comfortable settings.

Appearance: Tall. His hair is a gray ash color, except for when his hair is on fire, and is tied back in a man-bun. His skin is a tan-ish color. Along the back of his hand to his elbow are runes that look like…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle that hilarious XDXDXD

@koshka

Yeah…I think mostly I need to write like two more pieces, and then it’s just editing the rest. So hopefully this is doable XDXD *hopefully**

I think I just need enthusiastic pep talking right now, but emailing would help a lot too!!!

@ellette-giselle

That’s totally fine!!! Just don’t let me give up lollll

That’s the main thing I’m…[Read more]

Also, this isn’t going to be a novel. More like a collection of works that intertwine somehow.

I mainly just need accountability, but I would love your guys’ thoughts because I want this to be GOOD!!! It is going to a silent auction after all hahahaha

SO please tear it apart as well XD

@whalekeeper

6.

Marbles (also called Marbie) is the one in the photo. She’s my grumpy lady.

Then there’s her sons Mazel and Candy. Button and Hobbes, our adopted stray kittens and finally good ol’ Mr. Mittens.

@whalekeeper

Is that a partial face reveal I see? 🫢

Actually it is.

@hybridlore

(Let us know if anything changes! 😉)

I will 🙂

I’ll tag the art people. Don’t feel obligated to reply.

@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @grcr @elishavet-pidyon @i-know-im-forgetting-someone-please-help

@grcr

Ohh, I’d love one! I’ll have to pick a character, though 🤔

@ellette-giselle

For some reason I thought of you IMMEDIATELY (probably because we’ve had so many conversations about slapping your writing on paper and NEVER GOING BACK (something that I struggle to not do since I’m a perfectionist lol))

It’s okay!!! I completely understand and I can’t even imagine how hard the past few weeks have been for…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ok! Yeah, again, do what you wanna do. But if you want some ideas or need a brainstorming partner just lmk!

I will!!! TYSM!!! 🙃

Yes I totally get it!! You definitely don’t have to go through and try to fix everything in the first draft 🥴

ahhhh hahaha yeah, I’d definitely get in trouble with @ellette-giselle if I did that…. (jk jk h…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

Glad I was able to help!!!!!

I do love your dialogue though…you’re so talented in that area!!! Just maybe breaking it up would help A LOT. Because too much o…[Read more]

@stephie

I feel like it totally depends on the situation.

Though, at least for me, something doesn’t feel right about saying “your religion is wrong and false.” Because that tends to get people defensive and push them away from Jesus. I feel way more comfortable with saying “I believe that there is only one God….(etc…)” and just sharing what…[Read more]